Anybody out there good at action sequences?
And/or writing "around" action sequences instead of writing the literal action therein?
Apparently? Turns out I'm kind of crap at it.
Ugh.
::goes off to work on one of the other fics for awhile.::
(In all seriousness, if there's anyone with a feel for that kind of thing, I'd love you a billionty if you'd be willing to take a look at what I've got and let me know if it needs to be scrapped (quite possible) and taken in a different direction.
Apparently? Turns out I'm kind of crap at it.
Ugh.
::goes off to work on one of the other fics for awhile.::
(In all seriousness, if there's anyone with a feel for that kind of thing, I'd love you a billionty if you'd be willing to take a look at what I've got and let me know if it needs to be scrapped (quite possible) and taken in a different direction.