Change of Format?

Mar 05, 2012 15:17

A while ago a friend of mine, who I guess is kind of my proofreader and general soundboard, read through the update and found herself a little confused initially when beginning each section. So I was wondering how many of you find yourself in the same boat, and if it should be changed to something clearer ( Read more... )

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seraphic_slayer March 6 2012, 01:00:08 UTC
I think I used to get confused before I started getting more comfortable with who the characters are and what's going on with them, but I think it might help to have the names for people who aren't TOTALLY OBSESSED with your stories like I am.

Also? Moar Van. Like I'm not gonna say it.

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cutler_legacy March 6 2012, 02:10:43 UTC
That's understandable considering how many new characters were introduced in gen2. It's about to get worse, dun dun dun!
Thankfully most of them wont get their own perspectives.

Of course moar Van! I'm not sure if he'll fit in the current one I'm writing (mostly because I'm trying to explain a relationship w/ a new character that keeps getting insanely long), but he'll definitely be in the next to visit for Christmas. *Insert attractive male love interest here*

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seraphic_slayer March 6 2012, 02:28:34 UTC
Woot! Van-Shaped goodness (even if it's just a little bit).

Now I'm going to ask one of those "oh my god, shut up, you're only making it worse!" questions...since you posted I decided to go back and reread the entire legacy.

Y'know...because it's so BLINKING awesome...

...and I have a question (which may have been answered already, as I am admittedly only on Gen 1.11 at the moment); what happened to Aimee's brother Gary? Will he ever make a reappearance?

.........Yeah, like you need ANOTHER character to worry about...

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cutler_legacy March 6 2012, 02:42:09 UTC
It's okay :P

Well, after their mother did such a shitty job of looking after his brood while they were out (it nearly or could have drowned, I don't remember which, honestly), and the constant BS related to Aimee and her life, Gary just sort of... swore Julia out of his life. He refused to go to the funeral, even though he could've seen his sister (and her son) for the first time in several years.

However, being that things are going so well for her, and surely he's gotten over the tension by now, it's high time they had a reunion. Hmm... Christmas would indeed be a good time *plots*

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seraphic_slayer March 6 2012, 02:46:26 UTC
Ut oh. Plotting. It seems I have unleashed a horde of rabid plot bunnies.

Again.

Damn me and my sexy brain.

(Yeah, like I *even* feel sorry for it. I do not.) If he *does* show up, it would be interesting to see what direction his life has gone in since he De-Julia'd himself.

I'm all extra excited now!

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