Mar 05, 2012 15:17
A while ago a friend of mine, who I guess is kind of my proofreader and general soundboard, read through the update and found herself a little confused initially when beginning each section. So I was wondering how many of you find yourself in the same boat, and if it should be changed to something clearer.
For example, George R. R. Martin breaks up chapters in Game of Thrones (for those who haven't read the series) by character perspective, with their name as the header. Would this interest you guys?