[fanfic] I missed you

Jan 20, 2010 02:17

Title:  I missed you

Pairing: none really. Junsu Centric, a bit YooSu if you squint

Genre: drama. angst. a bit fluff. friendship.

Rating: PG-13

Words: 2 350

Warning: unbetad. could be a few time mistakes in this xx. also deals with the lawsuit issue, don't like, don't read.

Summary: Junsu slowly watches their group falling apart and feels ( Read more... )

"i missed you", [yoosu], [junsu!centric], [ot5], {dbsk}, *fanfic

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Comments 19

ting5 January 20 2010, 02:39:45 UTC
*sigh* this is sad..it would be naive to think nothing has changed but I believe all five of them still love each other dearly..and I do believe in time things will turn for the better and the wounds will heal, Always Keep The Faith!!

Love the input of Su's habits, the touching of his side bangs, his humming :) and also the Yoosu at the end ^^

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dongbangsuju20 January 20 2010, 09:22:25 UTC
yeah, but the situation is~ sad so.. .-.
yes, I agree with you.
I also believe that they still love each other, how could they not?!
they will be okay, sometime.. it takes time, but it will be okay someday~
and it will make them just stronger, them and the fans. I really believe in this.

haha, that are basically my thoughts >ö<
because I miss these things so much~
and also the others teasing him in interviews and such ;^;

thank you~~
I am glad you liked it ^^
and yeah, haha, I just couldn't avoid YooSu, they always sneak into it a bit <3

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ting5 January 20 2010, 10:44:47 UTC
*huggles* Always Keep The Faith ^^

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rinmi January 20 2010, 03:50:48 UTC
thankyu for this realistic piece. i really love how yu infuse thier schedule n lawsuit into an emotionally ot5. i seriously think writers should focus more on reality such as this n make it into a artwork that gives inspiration n hope like yours.

junsu's sutble pain is reasonable n understandable. jaechun inevitable closeness have always been there. su knows that n isnt insanely jealous becuz he loves them both. i love how yu dont exaggerate any of thier character just giving them enough depth in the characterization based on thier real selves.

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dongbangsuju20 January 20 2010, 09:26:56 UTC
your icon is basically yoosu because that is Junsu's hand there :x

aw, that you think it is realistic is such a great compliment, thank you~
thank you ;^;
aw your words are somehow really touching~
I am really glad and thankful that you see my fic like this ^^''
even more because I don't really like the outcome of it so much >ö<

i love how you analyzes the story and and everything <333
*thankful for your detailed comment*
yeah, that was what I was trying to show. they all are friends and sometimes just two of them need each other more than everyone...
there's no need for jealousy, especially not in this relationship of them five <3 (or three in this case)

I am glad you liked how it turned out <3
when I deal with that theme and maybe also generally I always try to write a bit .. subtle and soft, because it is difficult to really know their feelings, but just touching the surface to get a bit characterization.
<3~

thank you, your comment really made me happy and flattered me so much ♥

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rinmi January 22 2010, 00:03:56 UTC
lol i love my icon too XD im junsu bias n that lead me to yoosu. ^^ dunno why but i actrually like having n chunnie icon more then susu lol maybi cuz im dominate XXD who cares its still yoosu.

aww im so glad my comment made yu happy becuz yur fic made me happy. i sincerely think yu captured the essence of thier friendship n expressed it in a fleeting fic but it pierce thru the soul if one analyze close enough. keep writting hun. i love your style.

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dongbangsuju20 January 22 2010, 00:21:37 UTC
lol
same here XDDD
I am actually more junsu bias (though yoochun really really won my heart the last months ♥)
but right now I just realize that I miss Junsu the most probably ;^;
but I have more Yoochun-icons and overall pictures I think than Junsu's..
I think it's maybe because Yoochun is a bit more photogenic than Junsu?! haha XD idk XD
and yes, yoosu~~ <3

;^; again so flattering >ö< haha
I love to hear such words because I am always so insecure with my fics since I read so many better fics out there >ö<
but thank you~

thaaank you ♥
aw, someone actually likes my style ;^;
*touched*
(just because I think my style is nothing special and idk.. sometimes I really dislike it :x it seems so .. idk not flowy~ (?) to me.. most of the times x-x whatever~ XD i feel really grateful and flattered that you say this <3)

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crossing_by January 20 2010, 04:51:09 UTC
they are so belong in five ...

hugssss junsu .... TT.TT

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dongbangsuju20 January 20 2010, 09:19:52 UTC
they do~~
like Jaejoong said 'if it's not five members, then it's not DBSK' <33~

they will be okay~
*cuddles*

thank you for reading and the comment ^^

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akihikaru January 20 2010, 09:12:50 UTC
AWW... so sad but... Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! the yoosu! OMG. so cute~ and so swet~ XDDDDD ♥

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dongbangsuju20 January 20 2010, 09:20:34 UTC
yeah, but the situation IS sad.. so yeah .-.

haha, but I am glad you liked the yoosu, hopefully it cheered you up a bit?! XD

thank you for the comment ^^

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pink_purplelove January 20 2010, 15:47:37 UTC
hmm..this is touching..its must be hard on junsu n others too
hope junsu get well soon..

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dongbangsuju20 January 20 2010, 16:05:44 UTC
thank you <3~
yeah, but they will make it ^^

uh, yeah >ö<
poor baby is sick~
he should take care of himself more

thank you for the comment ^-^

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