FIC: Red Sun No. 5

[cruiscin_lan]

Title: Red Sun No. 5
Characters: Finn/Quinn
Word Count: ~700
Rating: R
Disclaimer: If I owned Glee all proceeds would go towards the Howard Bamboo Legal Defense Fund.
Spoilers/Warnings: None.
Summary: Prompt: "after Quinn finds out she's pregnant she has unprotected sex with Finn so she can pass the baby off as his."
A/N: Written for a prompt at

Comments

[perdiccas]

I've always kind of wondered why she *didn't* do this in canon. I mean, if she was determined to lie and tell him the baby was his anyway...

Aaaaaaaaaand then I feel bad for being so scheming.

ETA: Since I know you like getting feedback on the feedback polls, I just realised that I'm pathologically incapable of ticking the box and not leaving a comment too. Not that I wouldn't have left this comment anyway, but if I didn't have a comment to comment with, I don't think I would have answered the poll either because I feel rude just ticking a box and leaving it at that.

[cruiscin_lan]

I think if this happened in canon it would have made Quinn almost too villainous. At least with the hot-tub story, partial blame can be assigned to Finn for his naivete, so Quinn's bumpy redemption arc is a little easier for viewers to believe.

The feedback polls are really interesting to me for that sort of reason. I'm half-tempted to meta more about it, given the recent meta-discussions about commenting etiquette and everything, but I don't know yet what I'd be thinking. TOO MUCH TO READ.

[glasheen25]

I liked this:) Your characterization of both Quinn and Finn is spot on. I must read some of other your other fic now!

[cruiscin_lan]

Oh, thank you! I hope you enjoy anything else you read. :)

[becca_radcgg]

Gotta be honest, can't handle Quinn. But I saw that you'd written it and just had to read it. I know that Finn is like the world's biggest moron but with being a part of celebacy club and having a single mother you'd think he'd be all up on protected sex and not making an idiot "teenage dad" out of himself. *sigh*

It was really well executed. You turned sex for Quinn into something dirty and ugly when it should have been beautiful and awkward (if she'd really loved him).

"I love you too," she says back, but she isn't into it the way he is.
That is pretty much the story of their relationship. Finn has always felt more for her than she has for him (because she thinks he's an idiot and she doesn't trust him, and a myriad of other things). It's just absolutely heart breaking (and real) to think of her doing this to him. Scheming to ruin his life like this because she made a mistake.

Great work!

[cruiscin_lan]

I know that Finn is like the world's biggest moron but with being a part of celebacy club and having a single mother you'd think he'd be all up on protected sex and not making an idiot "teenage dad" out of himself. *sigh*

But I think he'd also be willing to put up with whatever rules Quinn set for him, if he could just get into her pants. At the celibacy club meeting she was all like "Don't you dare say the C-word!" when Rachel mentioned contraception, so I think Finn would be trusting and gullible and count on Quinn to make sure nothing happened.

[becca_radcgg]

See, that's why proper sexual education in the school system is MUY IMPORTANTE!

*sigh*

Like I said, very well written, as all of your pieces are! ;)

[cruiscin_lan]

BUT IF FINN KNEW HOW BABIES WERE REALLY MADE, WE'D HAVE NEVER LEARNED THE ~BEST BABY NAME EVER~

Thanks for reading, even though you don't like Quinn. :P

[fuzzy_paint]

So, this hurt.

To her this is a chore, something that needs to be done, a check mark on today's to-do list. - Gah, I don't even - okay, so it's their first time. Their first time together as a couple, and it should be beautiful, and wonderful and probably extremely awkward. It should be, but it's not. It's ugly and painful and so, so wrong.

Wonderfully done!

[cruiscin_lan]

Thanks! Sorry about the hurt. I'll try to write less painfully next time.

Nope, I just posted something even worse. My bad.