FIC: Red Sun No. 5

Mar 13, 2010 01:20

Title: Red Sun No. 5
Characters: Finn/Quinn
Word Count: ~700
Rating: R
Disclaimer: If I owned Glee all proceeds would go towards the Howard Bamboo Legal Defense Fund.
Spoilers/Warnings: None.
Summary: Prompt: "after Quinn finds out she's pregnant she has unprotected sex with Finn so she can pass the baby off as his."
A/N: Written for a prompt at ( Read more... )

character: finn hudson, pairing: finn/quinn, character: quinn fabray, fanfiction, rating: r, fandom: glee

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becca_radcgg March 13 2010, 15:52:22 UTC
Gotta be honest, can't handle Quinn. But I saw that you'd written it and just had to read it. I know that Finn is like the world's biggest moron but with being a part of celebacy club and having a single mother you'd think he'd be all up on protected sex and not making an idiot "teenage dad" out of himself. *sigh*

It was really well executed. You turned sex for Quinn into something dirty and ugly when it should have been beautiful and awkward (if she'd really loved him).

"I love you too," she says back, but she isn't into it the way he is.
That is pretty much the story of their relationship. Finn has always felt more for her than she has for him (because she thinks he's an idiot and she doesn't trust him, and a myriad of other things). It's just absolutely heart breaking (and real) to think of her doing this to him. Scheming to ruin his life like this because she made a mistake.

Great work!

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cruiscin_lan March 13 2010, 16:30:29 UTC
I know that Finn is like the world's biggest moron but with being a part of celebacy club and having a single mother you'd think he'd be all up on protected sex and not making an idiot "teenage dad" out of himself. *sigh*

But I think he'd also be willing to put up with whatever rules Quinn set for him, if he could just get into her pants. At the celibacy club meeting she was all like "Don't you dare say the C-word!" when Rachel mentioned contraception, so I think Finn would be trusting and gullible and count on Quinn to make sure nothing happened.

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becca_radcgg March 13 2010, 16:32:25 UTC
See, that's why proper sexual education in the school system is MUY IMPORTANTE!

*sigh*

Like I said, very well written, as all of your pieces are! ;)

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cruiscin_lan March 13 2010, 16:36:36 UTC
BUT IF FINN KNEW HOW BABIES WERE REALLY MADE, WE'D HAVE NEVER LEARNED THE ~BEST BABY NAME EVER~

Thanks for reading, even though you don't like Quinn. :P

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becca_radcgg March 13 2010, 16:38:34 UTC
Oh EEMMM GEEEEE!! I fully dare you to name your first kid that! ;) Best Baby Name EVER!

Or maybe you could go with "Spritzer" that's what they called it in San Antonio!

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