a crappy poem

[crowseye]

Just a thing I wrote that's actually a song. I'll add the music eventually. The year-end just always makes me take a time to think about what it has brought to me and what it has not.

PARADIGM SHIFT

Please

Don’t let me go

Into that cold night

Let me stay right here

Breathing in your light

The night

is full of glowing eyes

They want to watch me fall

Comments

Severka

[anonymous]

My dear, I´ve just read it third time. That´s REALLY beautiful. And he really does not merit it. Even though he can´t read it. Sorry for my English :-)

[e_danae]

It makes me shiver. I'm almost afraid of the promised music... It might be too strong then.
See you on Thursday!