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we are golden

Apr 16, 2011 20:34

title: we are golden
author: pikasu
rating: pg
genre: romance
pairing: yunho/jaejoong
summary: along the underpass to the subway, yunho meets jaejoong, carefree and disquieting like the wind.
notes: inspired by chun_ji's do you remember what fearless felt like? and very much dedicated to her as well.

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pairing: yunho/jaejoong, rating: pg, author: pikasu, length: oneshot, genre: romance, fandom: dbsk

Comments 59

spot chun_ji April 16 2011, 12:36:57 UTC

spotspotspotspotspotspotspotspotspotspotspotspotspotspotspot

Re: spot chun_ji April 16 2011, 13:02:26 UTC

he spots him
LIKE I SPOT YOUR FICS JK

jaejoong, the stranger with a guitar under a broken subway light is beautiful like the lyrics he writes.

we're all a little messed up, he sings. little bundles of joy sewn together with suspicion and fear, oh won't you rip them down?
DID YOU WRITE THESE LYRICS YOURSELF BC IF SO :Q___

it captivates yunho. to him, jaejoong is like the wind, so unrestrained and free that he feels just like a maple leaf, blown away by jaejoong's breeziness
ksdflskfj it captivates him ;______; so short and heartbreaking and that sentence is like poetry ♥

a place, any place - he didn't mind, as long as there was jaejoong

jaejoong's face illuminated allows yunho to see the sparkle in his eyes, and the tiny cracks that formed when his eyes catches the lights; broken.
sdkfsjlfjl have i told you how your smallest descriptions of details are so moving and the whole tone is so intense and guhh ;____;

there's something about jaejoong's voice that makes yunho want to fly, an air about it that traces wings onto his back ( ... )

Re: spot pikasu April 24 2011, 11:49:22 UTC

UP TILL NOW I HAVE NO IDEA HOW IM GOING TO REPLY TO THIS WITHOUT SMILING LIKE MAD

Re: spot chun_ji April 24 2011, 12:50:46 UTC

NO NEED TO REPLY, JUST SEND ME A PICTURE OF YOUR SMILE :{D /online predator

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gabrielle2720 April 16 2011, 12:54:57 UTC

Spot ^^

pikasu April 16 2011, 13:48:02 UTC

:D ♥

alicachen April 16 2011, 13:05:36 UTC

To park my Jimmy Choo here ^^ I kind of missing your story!! Thanks for sharing, bb!!! Stay alive and positive, oke?

pikasu April 16 2011, 13:48:42 UTC

ahh thank you bb ! :)) yes i will ^^ thank you for always being so nice to me <33333 ♥

shinchul303 April 16 2011, 13:23:50 UTC

Beautiful, sad, gentle--I love the way you slowly revealed Jaejoong to us. And all the unwritten story between the lines: Jaejoong setting his sights on Yunho from the beginning, knowing he was what he needed to keep going on.

I always enjoy your stories.

pikasu April 16 2011, 13:49:38 UTC

:D thank you so much for providing such a lovely comment to this fic! i'm happy it worked for you, and incredibly flattered you enjoy what i write! thank you :)) ♥

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pikasu April 16 2011, 13:49:01 UTC

:D thank you bb! please take care of yourself kk :))