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P066: A Recipe For Disaster

Sep 22, 2016 17:16

From: ecaitlin

Title: A Recipe For Disaster
Prompt Code: P066
Rating: PG-13
Side Pairing(s): (minor)Xiumin/Luhan
Length: 15500 words
Summary: Kim Junmyeon may be the cutest guy Jongdae has ever met, but he's also a terrible baker.

Jongdae is sipping his morning coffee and scrolling through his SNS, liking every cute animal picture he sees, when ( Read more... )

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oneforyourfire September 22 2016, 13:40:17 UTC

DEAR GOD THIS FIC!!!!!

i fucking knew from the moment jongdae and suho met and jongdae thought his handsome face screamed "trust me im reliable", i fucking knew that i was in for an amazing fic (it's honestly one of the most apt fic descriptons of suho i've ever seen ( ... )

mydaedream September 22 2016, 13:51:31 UTC

WHO ARE YOU LET ME LOVE YOU

First of all - all the characters were on point !!! I am a very picky reader but your fic made my night so much better.
I basically cooed my way through the story because Junmyeon was so cute and oblivious. I loved him so much in this.

Oh god and Jongdae, our sweet little man with the too big heart and selflessness that is borderline stupid at times. I was pretty much as amused as TaoHun at one point. Especially when Jongdae pulled another ninja /let's-switch-dessert-move/.
Luhan is Luhan. You must love him and come one who does not want a piece of Minseok?

I want a piece

A big piece

/clears throat/

But SuChen clumsily stumbling their way into love and Jongdae laughing at Junmyeon's lame jokes gives me life.
This fic was amazing really. Also lol@Tao constantly stuffing his mouth and Sehun boasting about his instagram fame. Loved LOVED IT♡

noonaofdarkness September 22 2016, 15:01:42 UTC

"Jongdae realized that all of the cute in the universe had converged into one small man." that is the most apt description of Joonmyun I have ever read.

I am so in love with this adorable (and cute, very cute) fic. The joonmyun/jongdae development was perfect and your descriptions of each character were so spot on. I especially loved Minseok, and his not discouragement of Luhan's advances. You really just hit the nail on the head with each dynamic, be it romantic or platonic. I could picture everything so clearly, and the dialogue flowed so naturally.

I think I'm probably a little in love with this story. can't wait for reveals! thank you for sharing such a lovely fic.

shineebean September 22 2016, 18:41:00 UTC

I FEEL SO BLESSED TO HAVE READ THIS DELIGHTFUL FIC

i love everything??? as someone who loves to bake, i was seriously horrified with how each of junmyeon's attempts came out but oh my god jongdae just wanting to make him happy CRUSHED MY HEART. you did an amazing job with the characters- as minor as some were, each had a wonderfully distinct personality and none of them blended together. i especially liked minseok not wanting to go into the classroom first and luhan basically forgetting jongdae's existence and ridiculous college kids taohun (you're always ugly!/ he has, like, a million followers) and how they banded together to help jongdae accomplish his cute switching missions. and i so admire how perfectly you wrote the way jongdae and junmyeon got to know each other and grew into their mutual attraction, every single detail was just right.

ugh really everything that happened in this fic made me so happy, i was grinning the entire time i was reading. thank you so much for writing this.

lialin1021 September 22 2016, 20:00:49 UTC

Thank you so much for such a cute, delightful and well-written fic! It took just few minutes of reading for me to be sure I will fall in love with it. And around the middle of it I put it in my top 3 SuChen fics, no hesitation ( ... )