P066: A Recipe For Disaster

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From: ecaitlin

Title: A Recipe For Disaster
Prompt Code: P066
Rating: PG-13
Side Pairing(s): (minor)Xiumin/Luhan
Length: 15500 words
Summary: Kim Junmyeon may be the cutest guy Jongdae has ever met, but he's also a terrible baker.

Jongdae is sipping his morning coffee and scrolling through his SNS, liking every cute animal picture he sees, when

Comments

[lialin1021]

Thank you so much for such a cute, delightful and well-written fic! It took just few minutes of reading for me to be sure I will fall in love with it. And around the middle of it I put it in my top 3 SuChen fics, no hesitation.

Reading it was like to be wrapped in a fuzzy, comfortable blanket, mug of hot chocolate with marshmallows in hand. So warm and sweet. But there’s really more to this fic than all the cute and fluff - the characters and dynamics are honestly spot-on. Nothing felt out of place for me, so natural and amazingly portrayed. I also enjoyed the pace of the fic. It’ hard not to make things too rushed at some places, especially at the end, but you mastered it in my opinion. Oh and another thing that was very pleasant was the part with Jongdae and Minseok opening their café - I just felt like it added another layer to the story and it’s such a good idea. They would make great partners in café crime!

Also, I would like to emphasize few of the things I loved the most (I loved basically everything so it will be quite hard for me to pick just a few). Junmyeon’s personality was just all Junmyeon is, in my opinion - incredibly nice and kind, so freaking cute and cracking jokes that sometimes can be embarrassing but at the same time so endearing because he’s just too precious and proud when he actually makes you laugh even a bit. The next thing is Minseok’s and Jongdae’s friendship - I want to give you a hug for how well you wrote it, really. There’s just something about those two and we see it all the time how close they are and when someone writes it the right way, it’s such a pleasure to read. And the last thing (from what I’m going to list here) is that even the supporting characters had their own spark. It drew me in even more.

And I want to add one more thing - I adore your sense of humour! It's been a long time since I laughed out loud while reading... I missed it so much and you brought that joy back in to my life. So thank you once again - for wonderful SuChen, the whole charming story and the fact you shared this beauty with the rest of the world! You made my day... what day, probably a whole week with this fic. I can see myself going back many times and rereading my favourite passages (so the whole thing). I loved it that much!