Unannounced

[crimsonplum]

An entry for LJ Idol, season 8, topic 3: "Coprolite." A speculative conversation based on a story that's way too close to home.

Comments

[noodledays]

this is good stuff. and since your tag says "semi-non-fiction", I'll go ahead and ask - did you have part of this conversation irl or just in your mind?

[crimsonplum]

Thanks! No, the conversation is imagined...but the situation and the past details...all too IRL. This may, in fact, be as close as I actually get to saying it.

[crimsonplum]

Glad it's interesting, at least. :) And you know, there's a few things I didn't realize I thought until I wrote it out...so yeah, this was pretty therapeutic.

[basric]

Written very originally. I like it

[crimsonplum]

Thank you!

[whipchick]

Nice use of the second-person voice. Seems very heartfelt, too.

[crimsonplum]

Thanks...and it definitely is. I've had the same conversation in my head a hundred times. This is the first time I ended it realistically.

[copyright1983]

Very well done!

[crimsonplum]

Thanks!