So I'm about 3 1/2 chapters into my rewrite project and it's actually going great. I feel ten-thousand times better about this new draft in its consistency and tying up the loose ends. Contrary to my initial belief that only minor details would change... actually, that's kind of still true but not at the same time. I completely rewrote the scene in ( Read more... )

I've started rewriting Masked Memories. I don't think any major details will change, I just want to update the style and make sure everything makes sense. Some points WILL change though. I'm a stronger writer now than then (that was my sophomore year of high school, btw. I'm now a freshman in college - you can see how much time has gone by ( Read more... )

An epilogue. One reviewer of Yozora had suggested it, and I hadn't thought it was necessary this time (and he didn't insist or anything so I feel no obligation) but just thought a "short wrap-up segment" and a Sora POV post ME ( Read more... )

Took long enough, but yes the story is finished. Again, not much to add note-wise, but even though this ended up being somewhat difficult journey it has finally run its course. I'm pretty proud of the turnout ( Read more... )

Yozora's final chapter will be up tomorrow, if not the day after. Officially speaking, it's done. I just keep changing my mind about adding things and removing things. But it is done and I'll quit fussing with it at some point.

This might be my shortest post ever! lol

Hang in there!

There's not much to offer by way of explanation or clarification in this chapter. The reviews will tell me otherwise but ( Read more... )

Welp, 5,580 words later and chapter fifteen of Yozora is done. The plan was to post it tomorrow but now I can't decide if I'd rather wait until I've written chapter 16 and post them together. I suppose that wouldn't be very nice though, lol. So today after class I'll post it. Sound good?

I have to preface this by saying that I had already started a draft of Yozora 15 a while ago but I ended up not liking it and threw it out. It was kind of ridiculous because ultimately many of the same features took place. I guess I just needed to prove to myself that those features really belonged in the chapter, you know ( Read more... )

Part one of major milestones!!

I would figure now that the flashback makes a lot more sense with this chapter. The chapter title is drawn specifically from chapter 13. And Hei’s premonition comes from back when he was trapped in Miyabita. I almost wrote it so that Hei was supposed to recognize Inga’s voice, but I shifted around powers between the ( Read more... )

Let’s be real, you wanted to know how Hei had escaped, right? From the beginning (and by beginning, I mean when I was writing chapter five - Storming the Bastille) I thought about including that concept, but I felt like it would detract from things already going on. And honestly too, I had half a mind then (and solidified that idea this time around ( Read more... )