Princess - Chapter One: Nocturne of Love and Sorrow

[creative_kiss]

Chapter title: Nocturne of Love and Sorrow
Author: creative_kiss 
Characters: Teru, Yuki, Hizaki, OC
Chapter summary: Introduction to Teru and his grief, as well as Princess Yozora, her mute cousin, Hizaki, and personal knight, Yuki. Also, the birth of a friendship that Teru is less than satisfied with. 
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[csg_dear4life]

I'll have to try and remember to come back and read this later.

[creative_kiss]

You should! And let me know what you think :)

[aerysa]

Fuuun~ ^^ Of course me being me, I have to nit-pick XD

First paragraph.
He could hear the lyrics to his song in his mind, but his voice wasn’t good enough to speak to the sweet words out loud. - don't need the 'to' after speak.

ebony black - it's kind of redundant since ebony is synonymous with black.

Otherwise~ It was a fun read! Lol, and I still need to catch up with Gemini Plot... And finish writing my own chapters... Bah. I've been so distracted lately.

[creative_kiss]

What else are you for? Why do you think we are friends? lol, teasing :)

Yes, I should find another adjective... And the typo. Shall fix them both. Thank you very much :)

My writing outside of anime fanfiction is often really different. This is more my genre/writing style in my personal writings. And I've always had a Versailles vision in my head. You all should have been expecting this from me, lol.

I'm really glad you enjoyed it too!

[csg_dear4life]

I've finally read chapter one! :)
I do have to say, it's not really my kind of story, but you did a very good job and I really did enjoy reading it.

[creative_kiss]

It's okay. Thank you for trying it anyway :)