Comments | crashgirl82: Indestructible (Fic, Nathan/Peter)

crashgirl82

Indestructible (Fic, Nathan/Peter)

Jan 03, 2009 22:54

Title: Indestructible
Pairing: Nathan/Peter
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Incest, Slash, Sexual Content, Language, Violence. Just to be safe, I will say that there is slight non-con.
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes or its characters: I make no money from the writing of this story.
Spoilers: Season 1, nothing really.
Summary: When Nathan Petrelli hurts, he ( Read more... )

petrellicest, heroes, crashgirl82:heroes:nathan, fanfic, nathan/peter, slash

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crashgirl82 January 4 2009, 05:35:41 UTC

Yeah...it was supposed to be juxtaposition, but you're right, it is a little much. A sugar factory LOL! I'll probably just take that line out. I did so much damn revision on this, I must have read it a thousand times, trying to balance everything out. I found it kind of difficult. But thanks for enjoying it, I really didn't know what people might think of it. Thanks :)

crashgirl82 January 4 2009, 05:42:11 UTC

Line gone. It reads better now. Sugar factory explosion cleaned up. :)

nsaphrodite January 4 2009, 08:49:00 UTC

kudos for writing outside of your comfort zone. absolutely love submissive peter and dominant nathan.

crashgirl82 January 4 2009, 19:40:20 UTC

Yeah, me too! The thing that gave me the idea for this story was that while Nathan may have the stronger personality, Peter is stronger physically because of his abilities, and it would be only natural (in a kinky way) for Peter to let Nathan do this. I was a little worried about what some might think, though. I'm so glad you liked it. :)

clair3 January 4 2009, 15:37:40 UTC

This is pretty good!

crashgirl82 January 4 2009, 19:51:02 UTC

I'm glad you think so. Apparently, as I have come to realize since writing this, not only I think that Peter Petrelli likes it rough. :)

avaserenity January 4 2009, 21:33:44 UTC

I love how despite the fact that Peter will always be more powerful that Nathan he'll just about always relinqish power to Nathan.

Love this!

crashgirl82 January 5 2009, 02:45:44 UTC

Yeah, that's what I was going for here. That's why I couldn't say that this was full-fledged PWP, even though it's smut, because there is a plot, however internal. Glad you enjoyed it! And BTW, your icon is cool, Pathology FTW! I absolutely just love Milo.

henrika_amanda January 4 2009, 23:21:27 UTC

I normally don't like fics where Nathan's abusive to Peter, but you somehow made it work without making Nathan a complete asshole, and I appreciate that. This was a good read.

crashgirl82 January 5 2009, 01:32:25 UTC

Thanks, that's what I was trying to go for. I don't recall coming across many fics where Nathan was entirely abusive to Peter, (but then again, I'm fairly new to this) so it just came naturally to me that this was the way they would be together. I'm glad you enjoyed it.