Ache (GD/YB/CL)

[cranperryjuice]

Title: Ache
Pairing: GD/YB/CL (messy and unrequited)
Rating: R? NC-17?
A/N: This is GD's descent into "more than depression", vaguely inspired by YG's recent message about him. I don't descend into G-Drag-esque levels of navel-gazing angst too often, so this is...a little weird. 8Da

Comments

[bebesarang]

this make me sad.T_T
i hope i will not have nightmares tonight cuz freakin YB broke Ji's heart.

i hope YB will have a change of heart.he'll realize he love jiyong back more than a friend.
so i'm a sucker for happy ending.

[cranperryjuice]

Thanks for commenting! (Sorry for making you so sad, though. ;))

[bebesarang]

it's okay.it's just make believe anyway.
judging from what i can see from fancams,i can see yb's adoration for gd and vice versa.
and that's enough for me.

but this story is just sooo damn good that no matter how painful it is,i still read it again and again.and cry each time.
i'm such a masochist.

i hope you write GDYB with a happy ending next time.pwease?
*offer cranberries as a bribe*

thank you.

[cranperryjuice]

Yeah, it's easy to see that they're really close friends in real life. :)

I actually wrote a GDYB story with a happy ending a little while ago. ^^ You can find it here if you feel like giving it a try.

[bambinainnero]

wow. that was painfully beautiful ♥ /tries being coherent and fails

[cranperryjuice]

Thank you. :) ♥

[exoxendo]

G-Dragon. Why do you make me like him? XD; Well, uuh. Yhat kind of sounds sadistic, but this isn't the only piece, so...

That was really, really good and I'll even echo beautoful. ♥

[cranperryjuice]

N'aww, thanks. :3 It's all part of a conspiracy to make G-Dragon god-king of the universe. *nod*

[bluemonkiesx]

OH.MY.GOD.
make YB gay for GD, please?
XD

gah<3

[cranperryjuice]

Maybe next time. XD Thanks! ♥

[butterflyweb]

*is impressed*

I think you handled this subject really, really well--I could really feel the way Jiyong's stress was eating him up bite by slow bite, both from external and internal pressure and it made my stomach hurt. It was so vivid--the part that perhaps sticks out the most is him suddenly on the couch, not knowing where he is, as well as fearing YG's anger.

Your characterization is so nuanced--you avoid the classic pitfalls/cop-outs of making characters black and white, good and bad to suit your purpose--I appreciate so, so much that you didn't make Youngbae the evil asshole or Yang the greedy corporate bastard. Just because Youngbae isn't gay, isn't in love with Jiyong that way, doesn't make him a bad person and doesn't mean that he doesn't love him as his friend. The scene with Jiyong sleeping as he strokes his hair just drives that home so poignantly.

Memed.

I definitely hope to see more from you with this pairing (and possible gdtop? *makes eyes*)

[cranperryjuice]

Thank you so much. ♥

I can't say I've ever thought about GD/TOP much - I'm definitely not averse to writing it, but I'm not sure from which angle to tackle it. Mind giving me a nudge in the right direction? XD If there's something in particular you'd like to see, I'd love to hear it.

[butterflyweb]

D: I tried really hard to think of something...*sobs* It would just figure you'd actually be willing and I'd have nothing. *headdesk*

I guess I just want to see your take on them--I get tired of seeing GD portrayed as this super uke...chick, for all intents and purposes (I would like to know, really, where people see these 'girlish curves' on him Oo) and you really flesh him out in a way that hits so close to what I get from him and that makes me happy. :) I wouldn't mind something unrequited, but definitely something real, a struggle if they are together. And perhaps a bit of the age issue versus who's leader. Because tension on who deserves more respect is kind of hot. :)

*end ramble*

[cranperryjuice]

That was enough to get the creative juices flowing. XD I'm working on it. ♥