fic: twilight - bred my misery and drowned it in him, part one (edward/jacob)

[boundary]

title. bred my misery and drowned it in him
fandom/pairing. twilight / edward/jacob
rating. pg13
parts. i, ii, iii
summary. Edward walked towards him again, his eyes focused on the boy falling apart in front of him. He didn't know why he cared, couldn't have put his finger on any one reason except that he knew the pain well -- knew the feeling of

Comments

[havens]

First of all, I'm so happy you're writing. I missed it. And I know we rp like every day, and we write to each other, but this is different. I love it so much. It's so fantastic and they're in character and you know how hard it is to find that with this ship. But really, I'm still too happy that you actually wrote. It's kind of funny, but I just am.

Okay, now fic things. As I said before, very in character! This is awesome and Jacob is Jacob and Edward is Edward. It's been done before, Bella bringing them together, but I like this way a lot. With Bella leaving and becoming what Edward and his family are not. And then depicting what life is like after she's gone and made a mess of everyone's life, not just Edward's.

Bella is such a selfish character, and you brought that out very nicely here. Plus, I love it when she goes a tad crazy after being turned and enjoys feeding off humans.

And now, beloved E/J. I loved it. How slow it went, how spontaneous they are. I wasn't expecting them to kiss, and then they did and I was just like wow.

[boundary]

Thank you, my love. I totally write to impress you and always get incredibly smiley when I do. <33

[ladyminya]

Oh God. You wrote Bella so well, considering she was only in the ficlet for a tiny bit. I wanted to thump her for stomping around like a childish git. :P LOL!

I like the direction you took the events of BD in. :) And I've never thought of Edward and Jacob in that way (personally, not my cup of tea), but you wrote them both in such a way that I was kind of egging them on. :3 Hee.

I liked it. A lot. :) <3

Also, that was my first Twi!fic. *gaaaasp*

[boundary]

Aw, was it!? I'm proud to have popped your cherry! LOL! Glad you enjoyed it, thank you! :)

[ladyminya]

*laughs* X3;;

I've got your other one sitting open in a tab on my browser, I just haven't had a chance to read it as yet. :3 I will sink my teeth into it (lol) once I'm done with my e-mails tonight. :3

[boundary]

<3333

[latex_muffins]

So I must say. That was brilliant. I was just thinking to myself earlier today that a lot of these other E/J fics don't take any cannon events into account or the fact that they can't stand the scent of each other. I get the tension, but it's nothing like yours.

I absolutely adored it! You did a great job with all the characters; Bella (wanted to kick) Alice made me sad, Esme was a good source of comfort...jsut everyone (even the minor characters) were great. :D

It was all slow and angsty then BAMOMGKISS! It took me by surprise. But it was a nice surprise :)

GREAT job with the spontanaiety, etc.
I probably epically failed with the spelled of that...

REGARDLESS! This = <33

[boundary]

Thank you so much! :D <3

[hipsandcars]

okay, so what we're looking at right now in terms of my reaction to this story was a lot of, "Bella = stupid" and some, "I don't know if Edward's an idiot or not, but he's sure as hell crazy," and probably even "jk;jk;ajklgdajkl;gdjkalkjqjkiuogdaklds," especially towards the last paragraph.

so basically a good response.

♥

super-stoked for the next two parts :D

[boundary]

Aw, thank you so much!!! <33

[ibelieve]

Love it.

[boundary]

Thank you! :)