fic: twilight - bred my misery and drowned it in him, part one (edward/jacob)

[boundary]

title. bred my misery and drowned it in him
fandom/pairing. twilight / edward/jacob
rating. pg13
parts. i, ii, iii
summary. Edward walked towards him again, his eyes focused on the boy falling apart in front of him. He didn't know why he cared, couldn't have put his finger on any one reason except that he knew the pain well -- knew the feeling of

Comments

[havens]

First of all, I'm so happy you're writing. I missed it. And I know we rp like every day, and we write to each other, but this is different. I love it so much. It's so fantastic and they're in character and you know how hard it is to find that with this ship. But really, I'm still too happy that you actually wrote. It's kind of funny, but I just am.

Okay, now fic things. As I said before, very in character! This is awesome and Jacob is Jacob and Edward is Edward. It's been done before, Bella bringing them together, but I like this way a lot. With Bella leaving and becoming what Edward and his family are not. And then depicting what life is like after she's gone and made a mess of everyone's life, not just Edward's.

Bella is such a selfish character, and you brought that out very nicely here. Plus, I love it when she goes a tad crazy after being turned and enjoys feeding off humans.

And now, beloved E/J. I loved it. How slow it went, how spontaneous they are. I wasn't expecting them to kiss, and then they did and I was just like wow. Oh, E/J. <3

I'm very excited for the other two parts. Hee!

[boundary]

Thank you, my love. I totally write to impress you and always get incredibly smiley when I do. <33