[Fic] More Than This - 1/15

[coley_merrin]

Title: More Than This
Author: Coley Merrin
Pairings: Zhou Mi/Kyuhyun, Tablo/Eunhyuk
Other: Zhou Mi/other, Kyuhyun/other, Eunhyuk/Sooyoung, various
Rating: R
Genre: AU, crime, romance
Warnings: violence, death (not of main characters)

Summary: Zhou Mi’s focus is Heartstrings, a dating company where love is more than just a guarantee - it's in Zhou

Comments

[vintagentleman]

sppoootttt because i love you and everything you decide to be in life

[vintagentleman]

But he did know how to search the Internet, and how to slam his forehead into a keyboard until it generally gave him what he wanted. I actually quoted quite a bunch of witty sentences from this chapter to a generally non-Kpop friend of mine. Have I ever mentioned that I love your style? And how it has improved, yet it's distinctively very much your own.

Okay first thing I'm going to spazz about - THE HYUKMI friendship ahhhh. I loved them in "Until You", and I'm glad this one seems to have more of their interaction. Also blonde!Hyuk is always good. *--* Zhou Mi is such a workaholic... e__e But thank goodness for that cheeky angel for setting him at least some sort of boundaries, hahah I love how you've written them.

Also, this.
“I have to confiscate his phone every day when he goes to lunch, or he just works and doesn’t eat,” Eunhyuk said, smirking at Zhou Mi who was rifling through papers Eunhyuk had handed him. “Just letting you know, in case you have to take over that duty if I’m out sick.” This is just the best line okay. I

[vintagentleman]

wow typos.
it's 4.30 and i will never understand why LJ won't allow us edit comments.

Or then I'm just stupid and I still don't know how to do that.

Anyway, did I mention that I'm really excited about this? I adore your longfics, they always progress so ... realistically? I don't know, there's just something really enjoyable about everything you ever write. <333

and now I'm babbling so I'll just kick myslf out.

[coley_merrin]

Can you edit without a paid account? I'm not even sure. It should show up after "Reply" under your comment if you can. :\

[jirluvien]

Remember that "I'm going to wait for more chapters" twitter talk? ...like I could ever stop when I lay my hands on a KyuMi fic.

“So, is there any way to ask this without sounding totally intrusive and obnoxious?” lol poor Kyu XDDD Ofc Zhou Mi has to meddle in his life in all ways >.<' (And Eunhyuk, but he has apparently different reasons.)

[coley_merrin]

Haha, I know how that goes~~ XD How to keep loving you say no to things...

I love the idea of Zhou Mi being highly curious, and organizational, (and slightly obsessive and dedicated). Even if he isn't a winner at love, he works hard. XD~~ Always a good way to get customers~ XD

[holly427jj]

Matchmaker Mi~
I find that a glorious job for SunshineMi lol
I would leave you a better comment but I suck so here...have another cookie.
*begins stalker mode* (again)

[coley_merrin]

He would be able to spread some of that sunshine around~ :)

Yay cookie \o////

[poisonpickles]

Just... WHOA.
A perfect first chapter. I remember you saying you were writing another Qmi/blohyuk a while back and I've been waiting for it. ;~;
And I was just thinking that I really needed something good to read and then you post this. How perfect c:
Definitely looking forward to reading this fic in its entirety. ♥

[coley_merrin]

Yup~~ Finally getting it out. :) :)

\o/ It's a good time for fic, hehe~

[philthebob]

bnjikcBDSVKIJU been looking forward to more from you for ages and I can't read it now because I needed to go to bed hours ago :( But on the upside my sunday is looking up ;)

[coley_merrin]

I hope you slept well! :D Excited to be posting~~

[philthebob]

And now I have read it and I still love your Kyuhyun. You are actually the writer who hooked me on QMi XD

(I fail a bit at commenting but I loved it ^^)