[Fic] The Cage - 2/2

[coley_merrin]

Title: The Cage
Author: Coley Merrin
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi
Rating: R
Genre: AU, hurt/comfort, romance, fantasy

Warnings: Violence, injury, reference to past sexual coercion.

Summary: The son of a king, Kyuhyun is gifted a slave of extraordinary origin.

Comments

[vintagentleman]

spotspotspot <33

[vintagentleman]

okay

[vintagentleman]

and ugh

all the sad weeps at the mention of Mi's past.
all
the
weeps

;_____;

Though it only made it so much more sweeter, what they had between them. ;~; The whole aspect of Kyuhyun making sure that he wouldn't make Zhou Mi follow an order against his free will... ;__; <33

Guh such a huge soft spot for that, the whole caretaking thing. ;--;
/I'll stop from babbling now. And using the enter-button as a punctuation mark, goodness that is such a bad habit.

This was the loveliest. ;--; <3

[coley_merrin]

Will be getting back around to replying to the rest later (I hope...I'm so behind /o\) but about the sketch, yes absolutely~ /brushes any crises off of your shoulders and gives you a huge mug of hot chocolate <3<3<3

[ilkhjoong]

spottttttttt

[ilkhjoong]

when i was first reading, i believed the slaver's lies and became scared upon hearing that zhou mi's words and skin were poison to humans. but then kyuhyun asked for his name and zhou mi answered back and it was fine :D

kyuhyun's father ignorance really shows when he says fairies must like getting caught because they allow for it to happen. i could not disagree more. that is exactly the same to saying the oppressed dont mind their mistreatment just because they aren't allowed to speak up. /shakes angry fists

so i'm going to start quoting my favorite parts now. i hope you dont mind that there are so many and my explanations as to why i think they are beautiful are really insufficient ;~~;

Only the barest pane separating their skin, palm to palm, and finger to finger.

this is beautifull. really sad. so wistful. so much love ;~~;

And for the first time, he met Kyuhyun's eyes. And Kyuhyun knew then, that the slaver had been wrong. It was not only the fairy's words that would bewitch him.this part....... i just. i really liked it

[coley_merrin]

Haha, yes. >.> The slaver's lies. And him being actually poison would've been sad. D:

Erk, yes. Kyuhyun's father really...has a lot to discover and learn. Perhaps having Zhou Mi around will help to enlighten him~ <3

I really loved that part where they "touch" through the glass. A really telling moment for them both. ;A; Just to imagine...

Sobs and wraps Zhou Mi in cotton candy to protect him. ;~~; Ah, and Zhou Mi being reunited to the grass and trees. XD I bet Kyuhyun gets that kind of reaction from Zhou Mi in the future~ They are...just too lovely together. ;~; Protecting each other~

And oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed preequisites also! <3 I had to go look at it again, just thinking about it~ <3

[plastictear]

spot ;w;

[myiuchan]

holy fuck jen, this is so so so so good ;~~~;

[coley_merrin]

;~~~; /pets them

I'm so glad you liked it~ <3

[shadowsgleam]

OMG. My body still can't stop trembling. I bet there are strange hormones in my blood from all the overexcitement.
Ah...your masterpieces should be illegal...I feel kinda high? XD
Love this forever!!!!!!

[coley_merrin]

The best kind of high! :D Ah, and that's why I love the happy endings so much~ <3 /gets you tea :)