Comments | cold_clarity: writing things?

cold_clarity

writing things?

May 26, 2009 02:15

and they're things for luckinfovely no less! because I keep my promises...sort of?

anyway, this is total drabble. I promised a scene, but this is more like a segment than a scene. or something. I've also apparently attempted to make sure it makes as little sense as possible. I don't think I even tried to reach for linearity or hint at any sort of context.

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it kind of makes me hate myself, writing, there are good ideas and then there's..., criminal minds, fiction

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luckinfovely May 26 2009, 11:15:41 UTC

DOOD. i have about 1.3 minutes before i have to be out the door & on the way to work, and then i won't be home for about 14/15 hours because i have to drive an hour away to have dinner with old people afterwards. SO I COMMENT VERY BRIEFLY NOW TO SAY TO THINGS:

1. THE FLUFF, I HAZ IT!; AND
2. EXPECT MORE LATER.

srsly, this is awesome. and you? SHOULD TOTALLY WRITE MORE BECAUSE OMG YOUR REID IS SO INCREDIBLY REID-LIKE -- easily one of the better Reid's I've read; WAY the frick better than mine, because i actively avoid having him speak geek (i'm too lazy to do the research). and your morgan? IS SO MORGANISH THAT I SQUEE WITH JOY because oh my FRICK i fluff him ( ... )

cold_clarity May 26 2009, 21:46:48 UTC

ahahaha, thanks. I don't know how spot-on my Reid is, but I secretly know actual legitimate geek-speak. at least when it comes to science things. I just sort of take what minimal knowledge I have and then....make stuff up? hey, the writers probably do it too.

BUT. that being said, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

luckinfovely May 27 2009, 03:03:37 UTC

omg, 13+ hours later and you are SO MY FAVORITE PERSON TODAY. the highlight of THE WEEK, even.

anyway. the additional feedback:

“Hey. Kid.” Morgan took hold of Reid’s shoulders. “You’re losing me with the technobabble. Just show me.”

GOD, the love I have of that line. Morgan at his Morganest. YES.

Your description of each character at Reid's bedside is friggin' perfect -- for every. single. one.

The shallow rise and fall of his chest, and the quiet bleat of the EKG are the only real promises that he’s even alive.

*LANGUAGE LOVE*

It’s like listening to the world through a glass box.

*AND SOME MORE*

It's kinda eerie that I was JUST YESTERDAY listening to that fight Morgan & Reid had in "The Popular Kids", wherein Morgan rats Reid's nightmares out to Hotch & Gideon. AND I LOVE THAT -- AND THIS SCENE -- SO MUCH. The ep because I LOVE IT when Reid flips a shit & turns all bitchy-girlfriend on anyone, but maybe that's just me, I dunno.ANYWAY. Like the earlier scene -- well, the whole fic, really -- you totally NAILED them. ( ... )

cold_clarity May 27 2009, 03:14:37 UTC

madame. you're doing wicked things to my ego, just so you know.

but thank you so so much. really.

and I agree on two points:

FIRST: the lack of fighting. I love it when they tease/mock/actually fight each other. this season in particular seemed to lack all that wonderful interaction. or maybe I'm just biased against this season. take your pick.

SECOND: bitchygirlfriend!Reid? yes and yes.

..as for writing more...well. we'll see. inspiration strikes rarely enough as it is, and when it does, I still have to contend with a world of angst over ficcing in the first place. oh, my life.

but again. thank you thank you thank you. :D

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