writing things?
and they're things for luckinfovely no less! because I keep my promises...sort of?
anyway, this is total drabble. I promised a scene, but this is more like a segment than a scene. or something. I've also apparently attempted to make sure it makes as little sense as possible. I don't think I even tried to reach for linearity or hint at any sort of context.
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anyway, this is total drabble. I promised a scene, but this is more like a segment than a scene. or something. I've also apparently attempted to make sure it makes as little sense as possible. I don't think I even tried to reach for linearity or hint at any sort of context.
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anyway. the additional feedback:
“Hey. Kid.” Morgan took hold of Reid’s shoulders. “You’re losing me with the technobabble. Just show me.”
GOD, the love I have of that line. Morgan at his Morganest. YES.
Your description of each character at Reid's bedside is friggin' perfect -- for every. single. one.
The shallow rise and fall of his chest, and the quiet bleat of the EKG are the only real promises that he’s even alive.
*LANGUAGE LOVE*
It’s like listening to the world through a glass box.
*AND SOME MORE*
It's kinda eerie that I was JUST YESTERDAY listening to that fight Morgan & Reid had in "The Popular Kids", wherein Morgan rats Reid's nightmares out to Hotch & Gideon. AND I LOVE THAT -- AND THIS SCENE -- SO MUCH. The ep because I LOVE IT when Reid flips a shit & turns all bitchy-girlfriend on anyone, but maybe that's just me, I dunno.
ANYWAY. Like the earlier scene -- well, the whole fic, really -- you totally NAILED them. Perfectly. THEY DON'T FIGHT NEARLY OFTEN ENOUGH ON THE SHOW.
Plus, I have such overwhelming, ridiculous love of the whole Morgan-hands-on-Reid-hips-&-turning thing. THANK YOU, YES, PLEASE.
*insert obligatory plagiarism wigging because i just, OVER THE WEEKEND, wrote a m/r ficlet about reid feeling hollow -- with ambiguous fucking, even* Shit.
And this ending you have, with Morgan and Garcia and the vent? Is gorgeous. Seriously. Gorgeous. And very vivid, so extra sparklies to you for doing what I fall flat ON MY FACE when I attempt it.
In conclusion, WRITE MORE HOMG. <3
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but thank you so so much. really.
and I agree on two points:
FIRST: the lack of fighting. I love it when they tease/mock/actually fight each other. this season in particular seemed to lack all that wonderful interaction. or maybe I'm just biased against this season. take your pick.
SECOND: bitchygirlfriend!Reid? yes and yes.
..as for writing more...well. we'll see. inspiration strikes rarely enough as it is, and when it does, I still have to contend with a world of angst over ficcing in the first place. oh, my life.
but again. thank you thank you thank you. :D
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I love it when they tease/mock/actually fight each other.
ME TOO OH ME TOO. in fact, my love of them hissing at each other, when coupled with my foul mood, produced the MOTHER of all m/r badfic fights. in my own badfic, i mean. THERE'S CHOKING, EVEN! it's so y&r. OH WELL. :D
bitchygirlfriend!Reid? yes and yes.
that's totally how it comes across! i snippet:
"this is what happens every time i trust someone. it gets thrown back in my FACE!"
oh reid. I FLUFF YOU SOME.
I still have to contend with a world of angst over ficcing in the first place.
you and me both. AND YET... *headdesk*
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...do tell.
and I think the only Reid I love more than bitchtastic!Reid is I-really-love-my-mom!Reid. but I think that might be an effect of my massive crushlovething re: Jane Lynch. because, really, how can you not love her...and the idea of her snuggling Reid and being all "Spencer, I love you" even though she's going crazy.
guh.
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i LOVE jane lynch. in giantboldsparkly letters, if i had the energy to bother. she's awesomeness dipped in magnificence, then lightly rolled in a crispity crunchity layer of WIN. they should totally make her the team's mascot or summat. she could be a valuable contributor to their work. SHE COULD.
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she has me so enamored it's not even funny. have you seen "Glee"? she's the best part of the show. and she has maybe ten minutes of screentime. in a show that is off the charts as far as dorky-campy-awesome-adorable goes. I just. can't even. god.
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plus, really, reid is just begging to get beat up. by everyone, all the time. LOOK AT HIM! if he wasn't so PRETTY when injured and/or weeping, the writers wouldn't keep DOING THAT TO HIM.
i have not seen "glee"! i've heard things but haven't gotten around to catching up with it. it's kinda scary, actually -- i have NO IDEA where all my time goes. fuck.
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I know. it's all his fault. though I really want the writers to hurt Morgan for real at some point. what's the point of him being so big and strong if not to see how much beating he can take? why else does he have all that muscle? plus, if he gets hurt, Reid can be all OMGCONCERNED and the whole situation will be heartbreaking. I'll love every minute of it.
you really need to get on that bandwagon ASAP. the adorable will overwhelm you.
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well.
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you tease.
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i can snippet you wounded!morgan!chokes!sad!reid fic, if you want. and if you REALLY want, i can work on finishing whichever one you prefer. or something that makes sense. :)
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can I be petulant and demand both? nevermind. I'm going to be petulant and demand both.
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ANYWAY.
i figure out what part i wanna snippet of m/rchokingweeping badfic & comment&delete.
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while you work that out, have some incoherent noises of happy anticipation. :D
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AND OH HI PRETTY BOYS I DO NOT KNOW. :D
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they're from a gay german teledrama called "Verbotene Liebe" (translation: Forbidden Love). It's on youtube under "Christian & Oliver", and it's the most melodramatic thing since melodrama was invented...and it's also in a zillion parts (because it's youtube), but hey. they've got subtitles!
oh here, just have a video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TgFz_uvK1BQ (ignore the bad music and the fanvid-y-ness and just enjoy the kissing, k? good.)
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