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klutzy_girl July 13 2010, 13:40:22 UTC
This was so awesome! I loved it.

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yamisadomazo July 13 2010, 16:30:10 UTC
OH MY GOD! THis was awesome! But the only thing I can focus on is the pinky and the brain reference in the last line! I LOVED THAT SHOW!

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elliemurasaki July 13 2010, 16:58:30 UTC
I adore this.

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katsheswims July 13 2010, 18:56:52 UTC
Amazing story! I loved it!

This time around things went much better for the boys!

(I keep thinking was that guy that Sam was with in the Impala-when Dean was watching-a shapeshifter or demon?!)

It was cool to see Sam meeting some of the other kids while travelling aorund. And then the 'deathmatch' when they're 16, a good twist. I knew Max was killing people, but I didn't know if it was only him.

I loved Sam and Dean. They were perfect together. That scene on the bed was very hot.

I would have loved to see more of the boys together romantically ect, and maybe see what happens when thier parents find out, but it's okay. Just as long as I can imagine them still together. (It was not a one time thing!)

Keep up the good work!!

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ladyoneill July 13 2010, 20:56:21 UTC
Really fun story. So many 'what if Mary lived' fics end badly but not this one. Loved the bickering and bantering between John and Mary a lot.

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