As Long As It's You (4/8)

[cleothemuse_fic]

Part 3

Comments

[magnavox_23]

This chapter is most lovely! I do like the route you've gone, getting Daniel and Vala to get to know one another really well before preceding with the physical relationship. :)

[dani101]

Perfect chapter. The way you made Daniel to open up to Vala-...that was inredible. :) Thanks a lot for the lovely upate.:)

[bkwurm1]

I ended up rereading this chapter a few times to better understand just what was going through his mind. i have to think that Daniel finally came to realize the deeper meaning when Vala said the thrill would never be gone with him. Practically a vow of eternal love. That makes his immediate actions so powerful. He could have gone after her and stirred up the thrill that both of them felt but I love that already he was taking steps to ensure that their unspoken love would be strong enough to survive and thrive. Beautiful.

So happy you are writing up the rescue. Gives us more time to see them in love as a couple plus the chance perhaps of getting reactions from their teammates on their "friendship."

[jeansmx]

I really love this story and I can't wait for the rest. I am so glad you decided to continue. So often stories end with them admitting their feels, but to me that is where the story really begins.

[winterstar95]

I just read this and loved it. I hope you do continue. It is well thought out and written. Would love to see what develops!

Donna aka winterstar