Prison Break - Mind’s Eye

Sep 20, 2011 21:00

Title: Mind’s Eye
Author: clair-de-lune
Pairing: Michael/Sara, fantasy Michael/Sara/Mahone
Categories: Het, slash
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~ 1580
Summary: Michael wouldn’t back off on this. Sara asked; she got her answer. (Post-series, alternate canon.)
Author’s Note: Loosely based on a prompt by zagzagael.

Mind’s Eye )

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zagzagael September 20 2011, 19:11:48 UTC
Yes!!! Yes yes yes!!!! This is why I love prompting writers - you get such a varied and individual response! This is perfect! And really, a great way to get around/address your own fandom/canon desires! Nicely done! And hot! And very in-chara!

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clair_de_lune September 20 2011, 19:49:25 UTC
wow, that was fast ;)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. When I first read the prompt, I thought there was no way I was able to write it - and I didn't really write it, but it's a threesome I'd never even considered on my own, so yay if it works for someone who likes it \o/

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zagzagael September 20 2011, 21:07:41 UTC
Enjoyed it? I LOVED it! I really love your writing, your erotic tension, your ability to write erotic in-character. I'm so happy you rose to the challenge. I appreciate that - it can be fun to write like that. I've decided to try my own...hand at this one.

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clair_de_lune September 21 2011, 19:06:55 UTC
I used to write more pairings, often just to see if I could pull it off. It's become harder because I'm not as infatuated with the show as before, but challenges are still fun - when I manage to come up with something, at least :-p

I've decided to try my own...hand at this one.
Does that mean PB fic? More PB fic is always a good thing *nods*

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tuesdaeschild September 22 2011, 10:27:50 UTC
I'm really impressed that you even took on anything Mahone-related!! So given the constraints (not writing dying Michael and no favourite threesome) you really did come up with something very worthy and enjoyable!

The idea that Michael likes to watch certainly gives justification to this scenario! And I know you know how much that last line would thrill me!! I'm wondering if I can tell Sara? *runs off in search of the muse*

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clair_de_lune September 22 2011, 19:24:05 UTC
I know! I laughed-cried a bit when I saw the prompt because I had so many issues with it *g* I didn't write the request itself, though, I cheated. That said, I miss writing on challenges, and writing things I wouldn't have tried on my own, so since I got a small bunny...

Michael liking to watch happens quite often in my fics o_O I also think that, in this case, he'd like to be in Sara's shoes, period. Fantasy!Mahone says it: You picture me with your wife, but all three of us know what you actually want - aka Mahone himself. I wrote it for the wild card: fantasies on my kink_bingo, but I guess it could have worked for 'triangulation of desire' too :-p

I certainly thought of you when I wrote the last line (and I fought hard against my OT3 self not to bring Lincoln in the mess story).
If you need help to catch your muse, let me know. Unselfish offer, as you can imagine *g*

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tuesdaeschild September 24 2011, 12:43:53 UTC
I have to admit I recoiled a little in horror on your behalf when I saw the prompt...I wouldn't say you cheated exactly though; you just came at it from another angle! :)

Did you know that halfshellvenus suggested we have a fic challenge over at uncuffmybrother occasionally? It has to be organised (wish me luck!) but I think it would be a good thing and it'll give you a challenge too! As long as you remember to include what you won't write!

Michael is definitely something of a voyeur in your fics! Why do I find that hot?!! And yes, in this case (also in many others particularly when Lincoln is with Sara!!) he does want to be in Sara's shoes! It strikes me that you can certainly see him with Mahone (canon gave us a hint of that, didn't it?) even if they aren't your favourite pairing! Not sure even I can see Sara with Alex though...but that's another square filled on your bingo card ( ... )

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clair_de_lune September 24 2011, 19:20:51 UTC
Well... It's NOT about Michael setting up everything to make Sara/Alex happen after he dies, but at least, there's some sort of Michael/Sara/Alex :-p

I remember I suggested monthly fic comment and weekly fic rec/repost for uncuffmybrother, but fic challenges sound good too, and yay if halfshellvenus is interested in something ficcy too. Good luck to organize it *squees a bit*

It strikes me that you can certainly see him with Mahone

Yes and no... I can understand why the pairing appeals to people, but it doesn't work for me for a bunch of reasons. As long as I keep a hint of challenge between them, though, I can imagine/fake it enough to write something short :-p
Fics for kink-bingo must be posted before the end of the month, so it's already too late for my second card since I still have three squares to write, but I should be able to finish it during the amnesty period. I'll have to write virginity/celibacy, danger and wresting/grinding. Doable, right?

if it's Michael telling of his (possible) fantasy with Sucre how hard can it be?For it to be reciprocal, it ( ... )

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