Prison Break - Mind’s Eye

Sep 20, 2011 21:00

Title: Mind’s Eye
Author: clair-de-lune
Pairing: Michael/Sara, fantasy Michael/Sara/Mahone
Categories: Het, slash
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~ 1580
Summary: Michael wouldn’t back off on this. Sara asked; she got her answer. (Post-series, alternate canon.)
Author’s Note: Loosely based on a prompt by zagzagael.

Mind’s Eye )

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tuesdaeschild September 22 2011, 10:27:50 UTC
I'm really impressed that you even took on anything Mahone-related!! So given the constraints (not writing dying Michael and no favourite threesome) you really did come up with something very worthy and enjoyable!

The idea that Michael likes to watch certainly gives justification to this scenario! And I know you know how much that last line would thrill me!! I'm wondering if I can tell Sara? *runs off in search of the muse*

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clair_de_lune September 22 2011, 19:24:05 UTC
I know! I laughed-cried a bit when I saw the prompt because I had so many issues with it *g* I didn't write the request itself, though, I cheated. That said, I miss writing on challenges, and writing things I wouldn't have tried on my own, so since I got a small bunny...

Michael liking to watch happens quite often in my fics o_O I also think that, in this case, he'd like to be in Sara's shoes, period. Fantasy!Mahone says it: You picture me with your wife, but all three of us know what you actually want - aka Mahone himself. I wrote it for the wild card: fantasies on my kink_bingo, but I guess it could have worked for 'triangulation of desire' too :-p

I certainly thought of you when I wrote the last line (and I fought hard against my OT3 self not to bring Lincoln in the mess story).
If you need help to catch your muse, let me know. Unselfish offer, as you can imagine *g*

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tuesdaeschild September 24 2011, 12:43:53 UTC
I have to admit I recoiled a little in horror on your behalf when I saw the prompt...I wouldn't say you cheated exactly though; you just came at it from another angle! :)

Did you know that halfshellvenus suggested we have a fic challenge over at uncuffmybrother occasionally? It has to be organised (wish me luck!) but I think it would be a good thing and it'll give you a challenge too! As long as you remember to include what you won't write!

Michael is definitely something of a voyeur in your fics! Why do I find that hot?!! And yes, in this case (also in many others particularly when Lincoln is with Sara!!) he does want to be in Sara's shoes! It strikes me that you can certainly see him with Mahone (canon gave us a hint of that, didn't it?) even if they aren't your favourite pairing! Not sure even I can see Sara with Alex though...but that's another square filled on your bingo card ( ... )

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clair_de_lune September 24 2011, 19:20:51 UTC
Well... It's NOT about Michael setting up everything to make Sara/Alex happen after he dies, but at least, there's some sort of Michael/Sara/Alex :-p

I remember I suggested monthly fic comment and weekly fic rec/repost for uncuffmybrother, but fic challenges sound good too, and yay if halfshellvenus is interested in something ficcy too. Good luck to organize it *squees a bit*

It strikes me that you can certainly see him with Mahone

Yes and no... I can understand why the pairing appeals to people, but it doesn't work for me for a bunch of reasons. As long as I keep a hint of challenge between them, though, I can imagine/fake it enough to write something short :-p
Fics for kink-bingo must be posted before the end of the month, so it's already too late for my second card since I still have three squares to write, but I should be able to finish it during the amnesty period. I'll have to write virginity/celibacy, danger and wresting/grinding. Doable, right?

if it's Michael telling of his (possible) fantasy with Sucre how hard can it be?For it to be reciprocal, it ( ... )

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tuesdaeschild September 25 2011, 14:06:03 UTC
If Michael was going to set Sara up with anyone after he died it wouldn't be Mahone. Lincoln? Most likely out of all the possibilities.

Yes, your monthly fic comment is a good idea and once I get myself organised we'll do certainly be doing something!! I'm pleased that halfshellvenus is still interested in ficcing too...did you see her recent PB efforts?!! One was a nice dark drabble featuring jealous!Linc!!! I always loved jealous!Michael but I think I like a jealous big brother even better!! The Blackest Heart

As long as I keep a hint of challenge between them, though, I can imagine/fake it enough to write something short :-p

You certainly accomplished that! Probably one of the most difficult prompts you've ever had (let's not mention tentacles!!) so you did really well.

I'll have to write virginity/celibacy, danger and wresting/grinding. Doable, right?I think you'll definitely manage to finish your card during the amnesty period since those kinks are definitely doable. I can't help matching those kinks to Michael/Lincoln and I sometimes ( ... )

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clair_de_lune October 8 2011, 09:16:10 UTC
Yes, I would say he would "pick" Lincoln too. That being said, you know how much I wish people shipped what I ship, and wrote what I want to read, but every now and then, I can make the effort to understand it's not the case *g* and since writing challenges are fun... I end up writing pairings I would have never considered writing on my own \o/

I will have to check halfshellvenus's ficlet. I've not been on LJ a lot recently and I missed a bunch of things :(

I can't help matching those kinks to Michael/Lincoln and I sometimes forget you write White Collar and The Borgias too.I still mostly write PB, usually Michael, Sara and Lincoln in one combination or another. I've written a couple of Borgias fics but it only was small bunnies and *whispers* not writing White Collar at all. I do watch and enjoy the show, but no fic writing and hardly any fic reading for White Collar ( ... )

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tuesdaeschild October 9 2011, 14:14:30 UTC
It would be nice if we all loved to read and write the same ships but the world being what it is...it's good to stretch yourself occasionally though by writing outside of your comfort zone. I've not done that much; I did write Michael/Lisa once and even Michael/Kellerman!!

halfshellvenus's ficlet is very short...kind of dark, too; and delicious!!

*whispers* not writing White Collar at all

Oops! I do get confused sometimes!!

I was thinking maybe using the 'celibacy' part of the prompt - something about Michael when Lincoln is in jail or when he gets out of jail?

I like that Michael would go through self-imposed celibacy while Lincoln was in jail. Fox River? Or earlier times in jail perhaps?

To be honest, virginy!fics scare me a bit: not easy to handle :-/

Funny how it's easier to write about the sex than not!! But whatever you come up with if you should need a beta...

I'm going to try to have another attempt at the fantasy fic tomorrow! Fingers crossed!

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