Prison Break - So, About Jane...

[clair_de_lune]

Title: So, About Jane...
Author: clair-de-lune
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Lincoln/Jane
Category: Het
Rating: R
Word Count: ~ 520
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: So, there are a few things about Jane that make him... (Season 2)
Author’s Note: Written for rosie-spleen’s Bleeding Cuticles Challenge.

Comments

[e_chance_woods]

I'd forgotten all about Jane! I remember watching those few episodes and hoping they'd go somewhere with the whole Lincoln/Jane thing, so thank you for taking me back in time and handling that.

This is a fantastic snapshot of a sexually confident woman, written so enticingly without making her into some kind of exploited, slightly distasteful toy (like, unfortunately, so many other het fics manage to do being the pretense of writing a sexually~evolved!female character). You've pulled it off beautifully, and crowned your achievement with the fantastic line, "Women like to get laid too."

Too right, Jane! :D

[dani101]

great fic! I always loved the tension between these 2.

[clair_de_lune]

They had great chemistry *nods*
Thank you!

[clair_de_lune]

I think a lot of peole hoped that too. Instead, we got Lincoln/Sofia - and I'm not going there or I'll bug you forever about how dumb and wrong this was :-p

Jane didn't strike me as someone who would have let Lincoln treat her in such a way - admitting Lincoln would have tried, which... no - or shied away from what she wanted.

On a personal level, if I'm caught making a female character this kind of "toy" without a reason, I hope to be told so I can slap myself in the face ;)

Too right, Jane! :D

Pretty much the same reasons than Lincoln - minus maybe the three years of abstinence ;)

[badboy_fangirl]

DA-YUM.

I so love them, and this is just awesome. I'd quote you my favorite parts, but it would just be a C&P of the whole 500 words. So great.

They so missed the boat with her. She was a GREAT character. Fifteen minutes of screen time and the fics it's spawned...just unreal.

[clair_de_lune]

*shuts down bubbling Lincoln/Sofia rant* Yes. They missed the boat indeed. Not only in connection with Lincoln, by the way: she could have been a great addition to the "let's take down the company" team in the last season. But two women in the same team? And why bother with the pesky previous events? What crazy ideas.

Ahem. What I meant was, I'm so glad you liked it ;)

[happywriter06]

*happy sigh* I love everything about this especially the first three paragraphs after the first *. Such fitting descriptions.

[clair_de_lune]

Thanks a lot :) Sadly, those three little paragraphs are pretty much everything we saw on screen with the two of them...

[tuesdaeschild]

Jane was always the woman for Lincoln. He needed a strong woman and Jane was it...how could the PB Powers That Be But Weren't have missed the boat with these two?!!

And how perfectly you brought them together, dear?!! Way to get maximum impact from around 500 words!! :)

[clair_de_lune]

Don't start me, I'm trying hard not to rant (too much) *g*

See? Short fic. Hardly edited and made fat. I can do it - just not too often. Too bad you didn't beta that one *iz evil*

Thank you, Foxy *squishes you*

[msgenevieve]

Gah, where have my Jane icons gone?

I love this pairing very much, and it's been so long since I read a Linc/Jane fic and this is just so good and now I'm babbling because SHE WAS AWESOME AND THEY JUST WASTED HER. *breathes*

Gorgeous fic, thank you!

[clair_de_lune]

One of the many things (or persons) they FAILED at. Ahem. I must be cautious, the start of a rant is never very far...

Thanks ;)