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nad_no_ennas August 23 2010, 20:05:17 UTC
Sigh.. lovely chapter. (and not a Josh in sight! ) Maybe it's just that I love this Orlando so much...

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azewewish August 24 2010, 00:11:54 UTC
Well, Josh isn't going anywhere, so you're just going to have to get used to him being around. Sorry if he's not your favorite character, but he's part of the story now.

Glad you liked this chapter, though, and that Orlando's still got your love. :)

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nad_no_ennas August 24 2010, 01:56:04 UTC
I don't mind him being around. I figure it's like in real life - you like some people and don't like others. It keeps the story real and interesting to me. Thanks for writing!

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weepingnaiad August 24 2010, 04:24:13 UTC
Orlando HAS come far! And this chapter gave interesting insights into Harry. He's very good at compartamentalizing (oh, okay, I made that word up, but you know what I mean!).

Really loved this quiet discussion between them, especially the assurance that Karl and Harry would let nothing happen to Orlando. He needed that boost.

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idiosyncratic August 25 2010, 00:33:47 UTC
Orlando really has come a long way. I know I joke to Brenda a lot that he's very demanding and needy and an attention whore, but he's grown up a lot. I'm blaming Harry's influence. *g* (And yes, Harry is VERY good at compartmentalizing!)

Glad you enjoyed this chapter! I have to admit, it was one of my favorites to write. :)

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angiepen August 25 2010, 00:25:00 UTC
Hee! Great wrap lines. :D

Definitely looking forward to Orlando meeting Monica. That's Monica Bellucci(sp?) right? Definitely a sexy woman.

Angie

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idiosyncratic August 25 2010, 00:32:09 UTC
That's absolutely Monica Bellucci. She makes her appearance soon enough, I promise. *g*

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