Fic: Chloe/Oliver - Back to the Future 3/? NC-17 chapter

Nov 13, 2009 21:59

Title: Chlollie-Ween Fic Challenge - Back to the Future 3/?
Author: Cking1575
Fandom: Smallville AU
Pairings: Chloe/Oliver
Rating: NC-17 THERE BE SEX IN THIS CHAPTER!!! BEWARE!! BEWARE!!!
Disclaimer: I do not own Smallville/DC or the characters. I am just playing with them.
Summary: A fan fic challenge from Read more... )

chloe/oliver pairing, back to the future, smallville

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slytherinpunk November 14 2009, 04:30:35 UTC
Wow

Thanks for the shout-out, I'd love to hug you back... But I think I need a shower first...

That was so incredibly hott. Wow. Thank you so much. I loved how they made it about them, but Chloe might be carrying Connor because of it =) It's so kismet.

And I loved Ollie's confession, and about how he was struggling with trying not to reveal his desire.

Thank you so much for this. =) It literally got too hott in my room at one point.

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cking1575 November 14 2009, 16:20:58 UTC
:D

You are welcome for the shout out! Of course I was going to thank you...really if not for the people who replyed to my post about whether or not to go with the smut, this chapter was stalled! I had everything written but the love scene and though it felt like something was still missing, I was on the verge of posting it with just the implications of the love scene. I am glad that I listened to you guys, and I feel that you all deserve the credit for the scene!

I did warn you all that this was going to be a HAWT! scene!! Heehee :D Really though, I am just glad to hear that you all enjoyed it.

Thanks again so much for your help! :D

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cullchestergirl November 14 2009, 07:26:35 UTC
WOW!!! All I can say it WOW. That was uba hotttttt!!!!! I love how Ollie confessed and CHloe didn't feel insecure around him. And the guys hearing the moaning and the rythmic thumping of the headboard against the wall. So hot. lol. Just loved it all. Great job. Can't wait for more.

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cking1575 November 14 2009, 16:23:29 UTC
Thank you for leaving a comment! :D

I can not even begin to tell you how happy it made me to see that you enjoyed this chapter! :D

Well, I am working on the next and hopefully the last chapter. Hopefully, I can get it posted with in the next week or so. :D

Thanks again for the comment and glad to hear that you like this fic! :D

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modscho November 14 2009, 09:38:16 UTC
Holy cow my friend! If something like that happens when you ask us for help regarding special scenes, you should do that every time - that was FREAKIN' HAWT!!!! Next time you should warn me not to shower first ;)
But I loved all about it really, the way Ollie confessed to her was like pure sweetness. they just couldn't wait anymore, huh? ;))
Aww and Bart :D
Gimme mo' soon sista!!!

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cking1575 November 14 2009, 16:31:15 UTC
Ooohhh My Friend ( ... )

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connorhawk November 14 2009, 10:24:56 UTC
OH...My .... God .. Wow. You know what I will comment when or if my brain ever will be start working again. Holy cow .. that was just: Wow!!!

Oh wait I totally love the in full momma bear mode, that was just so cute. And Bart and Chloe´s interaction oh. Poor Bart!!
And the guys were all priceless. And I really like it that connor is a product of passion and not math. I mean I like Emil, but not that much.
Can´t wait to read more. Update soooooooooon.
Hugs.

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cking1575 November 14 2009, 16:36:08 UTC
Heehee sorry about the brain fry! :D

No wait, I'm not sorry about frying your brain LOL, you asked for the smut J/K LOL :D

Anyway, thank you sooooo much for leaving a comment both here on the fic and on the 'help' post over at the comm. I can NOT even begin to tell you how awesome you are for helping me out like that!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! :D

Glad you liked the momma bear...LOL and I just felt sooo bad for Bart. And Connor, well I just had to have him a product of thier passion and semi unplanned...that was how it was always going to be. :D

I am working on the next and hopefully final chapter. It should be ready to post soon, maybe within the week. :D

Thanks again soooo much for leaving a comment! :D

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eternal_moonie November 14 2009, 12:20:04 UTC
I totally loved it! AWESOME chapter! Smut was great too! ;)

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cking1575 November 14 2009, 16:37:23 UTC
LOL thank you for reading and leaving me a comment! :D

I am glad to hear that you enjoyed this chapter...smut and all!!! Heehee :D

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