Moving right along. I think you're writing this insanely well. I don't think anyone is expecting you to know the insides and out of law, it's about entertainment, and you do that really well. I just really enjoy your dialogue and understand of the characters. Looking forward to the next part.
Oooh, I really like this! I can't wait to see what you have in store next. And Webber, homophobic? That'll be interesting. I wonder what the defense will have to say about that.
Im real glad you like it, thanks for taking the time to comment! Im not trying to write Webber as a malicious homophobe, more of one of those old fogey types who doesnt like dealing with it because it is not in his comfort zone, yknow?
Thanks for commenting. Ill keep an eye out for leggings in the post...:D
Webber's homophobia is more an old fogey thing than anything. I totally agree that Arizona would not compromise herself for anyone, but I kinda wanted to put her in a situation were external forces define you even though you have remained true to your own beliefs. Like if your family eats meat and you are the only vegetarian, you still eat vege, but family friends just assume that BBQ beefburgers will be fine for you, yknow? I find myself in situations like that all the time, like at work - and you kinda suck it up or let it go cos you cant be arsed picking a fight and suddenly you wake up and find yourself compromised, when you never did anything wrong in the first place.
LOVE this!!! I'm very intrigued by the story and your writing is so effortless and smooth to read. Really, really great. I also love how true to the characters you are. Despite it being AU, you've stuck with their characterizations from the show very well. Can't wait to read more!
Wow! Such a nice comment to read! I really try to get the characterisations right, so thankyou! Im glad you like reading my writing, cos I like reading your comments!
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Webber's homophobia is more an old fogey thing than anything. I totally agree that Arizona would not compromise herself for anyone, but I kinda wanted to put her in a situation were external forces define you even though you have remained true to your own beliefs. Like if your family eats meat and you are the only vegetarian, you still eat vege, but family friends just assume that BBQ beefburgers will be fine for you, yknow? I find myself in situations like that all the time, like at work - and you kinda suck it up or let it go cos you cant be arsed picking a fight and suddenly you wake up and find yourself compromised, when you never did anything wrong in the first place.
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