turn to Him and write poetry =]

Sep 22, 2007 13:28

 new to the community =] & i wanted to say hi!
also this is something i wrote..yesterday. 
going thru a tough time with someone but 
things will work out in the end im sure of it. =] 
God bless!

Epic

I begin

disgusted of the 
hypocrisy she claims
not to be a part of

exhasted with the 
masks she wears with 
the fake smiles, fake affection.

consumed by the 
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Write Poetry cleanrain September 30 2007, 01:50:20 UTC
hi cherie ( ... )

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glome January 16 2008, 16:38:12 UTC
Hi cherie, I'm sorry for what you went through. I love the last line of your poem ... "the sound of tomorrow." It made me think of the 'sounds of yesterday" also. What an interesting idea.

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glome March 18 2008, 04:42:32 UTC
Hi cherie ... just reread your poem and still think it is great. Is it biographical ... or an empathetic reaction to someone else?

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