i give up.
I can't seem to make any part of this story NOT totally SUCK ASS. It's just annoying me and I keep finding plot loops and holes and everything else a plot can do besides be chronological and fucking MAKE SENSE. So for now, I give up. For about the third time, concerning this story. Maybe it's just not meant to be. I don't think I ever really wanted to write it anyway and I only kept going back to it because I hate leaving things unfinished. Well, I have to say: I felt a little better about it being unfinished at 1200 words than I do now with it at 10000 words.
And we didn't get our award. Suck it, corporate. We fucking McROCK.
And we didn't get our award. Suck it, corporate. We fucking McROCK.