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Jan 09, 2008 20:21

Author: Chhhachie
Title: Perfect Placement
Pairing: Sabrina/Mark
Rating: PG
Summary: Mark and Sabrina discuss what they should do about their fans wanting to see a picture of them kissing. And come up with a devilish plan ;) (Derek makes a cameo)
Comments: This was me getting rid of all the dialogue I've been trying to keep hidden inside of me! It was a ( Read more... )

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fountnofthought January 10 2008, 01:39:44 UTC
I think I love you. Seriously. And you're my hero. ;-)

I just...yeah. That was magically delicious. I'm resorting to ad copy because I can think of nothing cool enough of my own to say.

This is one of those situations when there was so much dialoguey goodness, that I just can't quote it all. But I will say that Derek's observation of Mark's look of sheer happiness made me all gooey.

And the last line rocked.

The end. ;)

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krissylove03 January 10 2008, 01:41:28 UTC
Cute story! My favorite part was when Mark was staring adoringly at Sabrina, not paying attention to the words coming out of her mouth. He often seems to do that in real life doesn't he? It's cute when I see him staring at her like that in pictures.

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gydas January 10 2008, 02:36:19 UTC
Love it! Fluffy and hilarious! My favorite line: “It was. But just so you know, when we’re violently assaulted in a dark alley someday by a crazed fan, I’m hiding behind you.” *rofl* Keep up the amazing work! *hugs* ♥ Tiff

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chhhachie January 10 2008, 02:38:32 UTC
I'm glad everyone likes the last line...

I actually thought about adding on something after that, but in the end I figured the line was self sufficient enough to tie it all together!

:)

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soulpatrol1 January 10 2008, 03:40:14 UTC
Derek looked at the couple with a disgusted look on his face as Mark fed Sabrina a chip and whispered something in her ear. “I suddenly lost my appetite.”

I loved that line I could totally see that happening lol! Wonderful story I loved it all around!

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hollytiger January 10 2008, 05:12:46 UTC
LMAO!!!! Hysterical!!! you shouod write another part of them reading everyone's comments ROTFLMAO!

And Derek's reaction to them being all cutesy was funny as hell!

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