FanFic: Forever Yours (Chapter 4)

Jul 18, 2008 20:13

“That was really fun“, laughed Koyama while all of News walked down the street.

“That was first of all too much cake. I feel a little queasy”, smiled Tegoshi.

Immediately all guys were gathered around him.

“Tegoshi, you’re okay, right?”, asked Massu careful.

“I ate just a little too much, Massu. Don’t worry, I’m alright!”

“I ( Read more... )

nishikido ryo, fanfic, koyashige, ryotego, tegomass, tegoshi yuya

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yuyako16 July 19 2008, 16:08:11 UTC
uwaaaa!!!!!
how come yuya is acting like that towards massu???
aww!!
massu is his bestfriend and massu is just concerned about him ne??
poor massu..
*hugs the lonely buta*

and ryo.
i wonder what happened to him..
i mean..
about the phone call that he got from his imouto..
i wonder what happened..
hmm..
*starts to wonder*

poor yuya!!
he's so concerned for ryo but ryo doesn't really notice it because something's bothering him.
and yuya doesn't realize that massu is feeling left out..
aww!!
this is sad..

but OMG!!
ryotego rabu!!
kyaa~!!
this made me smile although the end part made me feel sad..
but at least it managed to make me smile and it helped me stop my tears..
ahaha..
i thought my tears won't ever stop from falling.
ahaha..

kyaa~!!
i miss you already eyleen!!
i want to chat with you again..
waa!!
and ohh!!!
thanks a lot for dedicating this post to me ne??
ahaha..
ilusssssssssssssssssssssssssssm for this!!
chu~!!!

ilussssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssm eyleen!!
chu~!!!
and please update soon ne??
and i'll be waiting for you.
i miss you..

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cherrylady6 July 26 2008, 13:43:27 UTC
awww mayne!
i was waiting for you answer! xD
i don't know about this fic ..
i'm happy when you like it but i'm very unsure with this xD

yuya is mean ne!
how can he!
massu is his best friend!
he wants his best ne ~
but maybe he understands yuya only when yuya is mean?
i don't know T____T

another reason why i'm unsure xDDD
i still wonder TOO what the phone call meant x__x
there must be a veeeeeeery good reason >_<
because .. sisters won't normally terrorize their brothers ne xD

yuya is poor too ..
how come everyone is unhappy in here >__<
i love it when he's concerned about ryochan!
but he doesn't notice it anyway ~
he's too busy with himself ne ..
i wonder how massu feels ~
i mean .. i couldn't show a smile then & tell him that all is okay o.o

Oh i don't want you to feel sad! T____T
but when i wrote it i was kinda sad too <.<
i'm happy when i made you smile!
at least a bit!
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh?
you cried?
mayuu! awww .. it's okay ne!

i'm so happy to read that you miss me ..
i mean .. you know what i mean (:
that makes me smile ~
but i miss & missed you so much too ..
& still do T__T
i hope we're able to chat soon!
ahaha you don't have to thank me :D

ahah i'll give my best!
now i have to update myself with news from je ne xDDD
i'll wait for you too ..
ilusssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssm too! Mayuu <33333
Chu ~

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yuyako16 July 27 2008, 14:47:12 UTC
aww!!
i'm really sorry for giving a late comment about your fic..
but it's good!!
and i pormise you that!!
it's really good!!

aww!!
you're right!!
yuya is so mean for doing that to massu!!!
massus didn't mean any harm..
he's just concerned for the well being of yuya..
but still..
yuya is being a snob to massu..
and i'm angry at yuya for that..
why doesn't he realize that his bestfriend is just worried for him??
*sighs*

yea..
you're right!!
[although i sometimes terrorize my brother.. XD ahaha..]
hmm..
wonder what they were talking about..
hmm..
*wonders*
i'm sure you'll have an idea what it is..
i believe in you..

yea..
you're right!!
everyone seems to be unhappy ne??
maybe he's just dense..
hmm..
i dunno..
i'm sure massu is hurt!
it's hard to pretend that everything's okay when in reality, it isn't ne..

hai..
i wasn't able to control myself..
it's just too sad..
but yea!!
i still smiled..
and it's all because of you..
ahaha..
chu~!!!

i missed you sooooo much!!
and i still miss you now.
hope we could talk sooner ne??
i really want to chat and talk with you..

ganbatte ne!!
ilussssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssm eyleen!!
chu~!!!!

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cherrylady6 July 27 2008, 22:40:36 UTC
Ahaha i don't care!
i was in holidays ne ~
& i know you're busy with school
so i'm happy just to know you read it :>
the time doesn't matter ~
& i could jump around in my room and even at the street if you say it's good T__T

eeeeeeeeeeeh x__x
you're angry at yuya o.o
what did i do! xD
massu is always concerned about him ne >__<
i wonder if yuya really doesn't notice
or if he doesn't want to notice it in some moments ~

hahaha xD
but i guess you don't terrorize him like the girl in the story ^^
every sister does that a bit ne xD
i have an idea but i don't like it xDDD
arigatou for believing in me ~
that gives me hope <3
but the reason is hard
because .. it must be such an important reason & uwaah xD
but .. i must manage it somehow ^^

jep, i think it really is ~
even when i'm in a bad mood i can't talk or smile like i'm happy as never ..
when i see so and want to be polite i can smile at him and talk a bit but it's still hard <.<
& in such a moment it's even harder ne ~
yuya is really dense!
oh dear xD too dense ~

aww haha you make me happy :D
when you smile ne ~
i'm happy
i would do a lot to make you laugh xD
even jump around with/in my chair ^^

i really want to chat with you too!
it's mean that you're so far away T_____T
Miss you ~

ilusssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssm Mayuu ~ !
Chu <3

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