Sorry I'm so late! Just finished my exam yesterday evening ^^ I hate when I have exam finishing at 10pm! What's with this school anyway *pouts* Haha sorry about that.
Anyway, onto the fic *take a deep breath :p* Okay that was… wow! So many emotions here. The first part was very cute and sweet with Jin’s baka side standing out slightly. I just love how cute he was being mad because he missed midnight and then he still try to wake Kazuya up but got so distracted by the other’s voice and worried that he totally forgot to wish him a happy birthday. Made me giggle. So yes I was having this big smile on my face for the whole first part, even when Jin found the ‘letter’ and was pondering whether to read it or not. I love how he decided to read it nonetheless thinking that in the worst, he’d find a way to make himself forgiven later. Such a cute curious baka ♥ Talking about the first part, special mention to => A perfect night is not considered as perfect when there’s no amazing sex with Kazuya. Teeheee~ XP
But then, as you started with Kazuya’s letter, my mood changed totally and I felt so sad for him. Seriously, the way you portrayed his feelings through those different times, it was like I could feel his despair and it was heartbreaking. I actually really like the idea and that you make the letter written from different times so we could learn about those hidden feelings and their development through everything that happened. But yes it was so sad at the beginning and I could also feel how Jin was hurting at discovering those feelings that Kazuya had been hiding from him and everyone for that matter. Well, thinking about that, it made it even sadder since it meant that he had been through this alone *pouts* *hugs Kame-chan*
But really *sigh* That sentence especially => Jin, tell me why. Why is your gentleness more painful than a hateful goodbye?” Somehow it broke my heart. But somehow, it made sense. It was like they were holding to each other even though nothing was working, even though they knew they had to part. Such a bitter moment. But then, the last part of the letter was just pure love with Kazuya getting back his hope and showing his whole support. Seriously, isn’t he just the sweetest guy ever? *shot* So my smile came back ^^ And when he actually woke up, I started laughing again imagining how shocked he must have been seeing Jin crying and even wondering what he had done while sleeping lol And then, and then, Kazu-chan being embarrassed was just sooo cute!
You know, you really have a way with words. You portrayed Kazuya’s feelings so well with the letter making me shed tears *pouts* and Jin’s feelings as well while he was reading it. And then, I love we got to know about their relationship and how it evolved through Kazuya’s words. And all the angst brought by it made the end more worth it! The last scene was just so romantic and I enjoyed their whole interaction… sweet yet funny~ It felt like a new start for them, a even better one ^^ And yes, why aren’t I surprise by Jin’s first side that he decided to show to Kazuya *giggle* OMG sorry I wrote so much… I got carried away and it got that long before I even realized it *get bricked* But I guess you can tell how much I loved it, right? :D Thank you so much Yuki~chan ♥
Re: ~Spot~kame_kiyumiFebruary 27 2011, 05:46:41 UTC
Hahaha.. it's alright~ daijoubu~
Lol. BUt that specially mentioned sentence seems a bit... lame. XD But I'm glad that it did have an effect on it. Hahaha~ XD
Hmm... like mentioned somewhere in the replies to the comments, initially this was supposed to be a ansty and sad ending fic. I actually planned the letter part only. But because I wanted it to be bday fic for Kame, so I included the bday theme in it and changed my mind, making it into a happy ending instead. Haha. But there's one thing I'm not sure if I mentioned it before, I was trying my best to portray the hidden feeling within Kame into the words and I did chose the words carefully to make sure its really easy for readers to get Kame's hurt and despair during the whole period.
Hahahaha! Oh yes, the part when Kame suddenly awoke and all, I was thinking, did I spoil the fic by inserting that part. =p Hahaha.
*blushes* thank you.. I'm not great actually. *hugs* usually I am inspired by songs I heard and then from there, I will work my way out to link with words and Kame and Jin's character then made it into a fic. ^^
Actually by reading this fic, you have to imagine alot by yourself. You have to imagine yourself about how Kame and Jin have broken up, then talked to each other while still liking each other, getting to endure everything that had happened even though they were separated etc. I didnt put all that down into the fic as I wanted readers to find it out themselves.. ^^"
Na, it's okay, I love long comments! XD ♥
Thank you so much Kari-chan~~ I'm really happy to know that you love this fic so much! *hugs* maucks! ♥ See you again soon for my future fics~ Hehe~
Anyway, onto the fic *take a deep breath :p* Okay that was… wow! So many emotions here. The first part was very cute and sweet with Jin’s baka side standing out slightly. I just love how cute he was being mad because he missed midnight and then he still try to wake Kazuya up but got so distracted by the other’s voice and worried that he totally forgot to wish him a happy birthday. Made me giggle. So yes I was having this big smile on my face for the whole first part, even when Jin found the ‘letter’ and was pondering whether to read it or not. I love how he decided to read it nonetheless thinking that in the worst, he’d find a way to make himself forgiven later. Such a cute curious baka ♥ Talking about the first part, special mention to => A perfect night is not considered as perfect when there’s no amazing sex with Kazuya. Teeheee~ XP
But then, as you started with Kazuya’s letter, my mood changed totally and I felt so sad for him. Seriously, the way you portrayed his feelings through those different times, it was like I could feel his despair and it was heartbreaking. I actually really like the idea and that you make the letter written from different times so we could learn about those hidden feelings and their development through everything that happened. But yes it was so sad at the beginning and I could also feel how Jin was hurting at discovering those feelings that Kazuya had been hiding from him and everyone for that matter. Well, thinking about that, it made it even sadder since it meant that he had been through this alone *pouts* *hugs Kame-chan*
But really *sigh* That sentence especially => Jin, tell me why. Why is your gentleness more painful than a hateful goodbye?” Somehow it broke my heart. But somehow, it made sense. It was like they were holding to each other even though nothing was working, even though they knew they had to part. Such a bitter moment. But then, the last part of the letter was just pure love with Kazuya getting back his hope and showing his whole support. Seriously, isn’t he just the sweetest guy ever? *shot* So my smile came back ^^ And when he actually woke up, I started laughing again imagining how shocked he must have been seeing Jin crying and even wondering what he had done while sleeping lol And then, and then, Kazu-chan being embarrassed was just sooo cute!
You know, you really have a way with words. You portrayed Kazuya’s feelings so well with the letter making me shed tears *pouts* and Jin’s feelings as well while he was reading it. And then, I love we got to know about their relationship and how it evolved through Kazuya’s words. And all the angst brought by it made the end more worth it! The last scene was just so romantic and I enjoyed their whole interaction… sweet yet funny~ It felt like a new start for them, a even better one ^^ And yes, why aren’t I surprise by Jin’s first side that he decided to show to Kazuya *giggle* OMG sorry I wrote so much… I got carried away and it got that long before I even realized it *get bricked* But I guess you can tell how much I loved it, right? :D Thank you so much Yuki~chan ♥
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Lol. BUt that specially mentioned sentence seems a bit... lame. XD But I'm glad that it did have an effect on it. Hahaha~ XD
Hmm... like mentioned somewhere in the replies to the comments, initially this was supposed to be a ansty and sad ending fic. I actually planned the letter part only. But because I wanted it to be bday fic for Kame, so I included the bday theme in it and changed my mind, making it into a happy ending instead. Haha. But there's one thing I'm not sure if I mentioned it before, I was trying my best to portray the hidden feeling within Kame into the words and I did chose the words carefully to make sure its really easy for readers to get Kame's hurt and despair during the whole period.
Hahahaha! Oh yes, the part when Kame suddenly awoke and all, I was thinking, did I spoil the fic by inserting that part. =p Hahaha.
*blushes* thank you.. I'm not great actually. *hugs* usually I am inspired by songs I heard and then from there, I will work my way out to link with words and Kame and Jin's character then made it into a fic. ^^
Actually by reading this fic, you have to imagine alot by yourself. You have to imagine yourself about how Kame and Jin have broken up, then talked to each other while still liking each other, getting to endure everything that had happened even though they were separated etc. I didnt put all that down into the fic as I wanted readers to find it out themselves.. ^^"
Na, it's okay, I love long comments! XD ♥
Thank you so much Kari-chan~~ I'm really happy to know that you love this fic so much! *hugs* maucks! ♥ See you again soon for my future fics~ Hehe~
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