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#43: Days with you

Sep 10, 2016 01:06

Prompt: #43
Title: Days with you
Pairing: ChenLay
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: un-beta'd so please bear with me
Word count: 2886
Summary: Jongdae comes back from China and realizes what he's missed
Author's note: This is my first time doing this so thank you moderators for being so patient with me

( The 5-year old behind him kicks the seat for the millionth time gleefully and he mutters darkly to himself. )

4: chen's birthday 2016, pairing: chen/lay, rating: pg-13

Comments 4

anonymous September 11 2016, 09:25:52 UTC

this was an easy read! all happy things <3

anonymous September 12 2016, 01:12:27 UTC

Lovely! Domestic ChenLay at its best. It was really easy to get into their relationship and the story. Thanks for sharing.

thebakaberry September 12 2016, 03:08:30 UTC

This was just so fluffy and adorable and I loved every second. I love how you went back to talk about how they met and then the cute scenes where they're just hanging with their friends and that one part where Jongdae pokes yixing's dimples I cry thank you so much for writing you did a fantastic job :)

rosevic87 September 12 2016, 07:37:55 UTC

THat was incredibly cute and fluffy! I like all the side pairings but I think I'm slightly confused with what happened with baekyeol and "losing". I'll have to go back and read to see if I missed anything XD