Wow Lucy, this is so wonderful. Everything about it, beginning from the depths of Onew's emotions to the very surface which is the language you used. Absolutely wonderful, I'm speechless. I envy you your fantastic ability to work with words. Everything flows so beautifully, every sentence is a pleasure to read, some phrases make me want to reread them they are so perfect. You are absolutely anti-cliche in every single sentence you write. Omg I used to many superlatives in just one paragraph but I can't help myself. I'm in awe and I wish I was able to write at least 10 percent of your abilities, coz you are absolutely amazing to me.
I know this comment took me ages, but believe me I felt so guilty for all that time! Finally I got to read and WHOA. If I dream about Circus of Illusions tonight I wouldnt be surprised.
Also, Tartot. You make me so damn interested in it, so intrigued by it. It gives a dimension to your writing that is very new to me, so new I am hungry for every piece of it, want it all. I would like to learn to read Tarot cards! It seems like there's so so much hidden in them. That part about the one you posted here, of the man with the seven pentacles, it was so interesting.
“Am I not worth saving?” -> One of my fav parts, oh it broke my heart for Kibum.
“I wonder though… If you had the chance to stay in your ideal illusion, would you do so? Deep down you know that the world you created isn’t real, yet you prefer it more than the reality. -> Reading this, I felt like... I don't even know. You created an alternative world, and you do it so well that everything works and it completely believable about it. It's like... the Star Wars epicness level or something. I dont know if that was a right example but yeah. Every time I read this fiction I feel completely sucked into it and I love every minute spend in it. You are a master of dialogue, by the way.
Unfortunately, Jessica never awoke as Taemin had, leading her to be considered a failed experiment. The master wasn’t fond of failed experiments. Onew held a grudge towards the first doll due to the master putting more attention on him than his Jessica. -> Jessica is in your fic :D Jessica is also in the story I'm writing now :D But anyway. This part was again one of my fav ones. Just, your amazing ability to tell your story. Ah Lucy, you are an amazing writer...... I can't wait to read more. Cant wait for next kibum/jong interaction. I love this fiction so so so much.
I take back the Star Wars comment coz you are on a different level. BETTER for me. I forgot to mention that that quote about ideal illusion, I could relate to it so much.
I know this comment took me ages, but believe me I felt so guilty for all that time! Finally I got to read and WHOA. If I dream about Circus of Illusions tonight I wouldnt be surprised.
Also, Tartot. You make me so damn interested in it, so intrigued by it. It gives a dimension to your writing that is very new to me, so new I am hungry for every piece of it, want it all. I would like to learn to read Tarot cards! It seems like there's so so much hidden in them. That part about the one you posted here, of the man with the seven pentacles, it was so interesting.
“Am I not worth saving?” -> One of my fav parts, oh it broke my heart for Kibum.
“I wonder though… If you had the chance to stay in your ideal illusion, would you do so? Deep down you know that the world you created isn’t real, yet you prefer it more than the reality. -> Reading this, I felt like... I don't even know. You created an alternative world, and you do it so well that everything works and it completely believable about it. It's like... the Star Wars epicness level or something. I dont know if that was a right example but yeah. Every time I read this fiction I feel completely sucked into it and I love every minute spend in it. You are a master of dialogue, by the way.
Unfortunately, Jessica never awoke as Taemin had, leading her to be considered a failed experiment. The master wasn’t fond of failed experiments. Onew held a grudge towards the first doll due to the master putting more attention on him than his Jessica. -> Jessica is in your fic :D Jessica is also in the story I'm writing now :D But anyway. This part was again one of my fav ones. Just, your amazing ability to tell your story. Ah Lucy, you are an amazing writer...... I can't wait to read more. Cant wait for next kibum/jong interaction. I love this fiction so so so much.
and ps: WE RLY MISS YOU ♥ a lot
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I was staring at the one you did for Chase Me just now.
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