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lanerose February 19 2009, 04:16:23 UTC
I didn't care for the beginning of this at all - almost didn't read it, in fact, because of that. You front-loaded a lot of facts about the world that would have been more enjoyable if they'd been spread into the scene ( ... )

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thephoenixboy February 19 2009, 09:15:07 UTC
I thought the bit with Hibari worked well here - the way he put off dealing with Tsuna as a partner as long as possible and the way the others let him. I could have done with a few more details - when he becomes 10th - but other than that I very much enjoyed. Thank you for sharing ^_^

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emcyclopedia April 26 2010, 07:23:28 UTC
i hope there's more to this au of yours. i loved it! :)

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shinigami39 April 27 2010, 06:14:45 UTC
Thank you! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it :DDD I was planning to write a continuation, but for now, it's still in my fic backlog orz ^^;;;;;;

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