Comments | catko: Caught

catko

Jun 29, 2008 17:18

Rated: PG-13
Category: Firefly; Mal, Kaylee, Jayne
Words: 200
Note: Written in response to the
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catko June 30 2008, 05:25:39 UTC

Thanks, pace. I wanted to try something a little funny. It was an easy scene to picture.

cmk418 June 30 2008, 02:56:22 UTC

Doesn't Jayne know by now not to trust anything with the word "Alliance" on it? This was hilarious. Well done!

catko June 30 2008, 05:26:51 UTC

Doesn't Jayne know by now not to trust anything with the word "Alliance"
I know! Thanks for commenting.

panareki June 30 2008, 03:39:15 UTC

*snortle* I can just picture this scence, especially Mal going from furious to baffled to around the corner laughing...nicely done :D

catko June 30 2008, 05:28:01 UTC

Thanks for noticing. I always love the way they move around the ship, and their various emotions--especially Mal's.

isha_libran June 30 2008, 07:17:27 UTC

Hee. I could see this happening. Lovely, thanks for sharing! =)

bookaddict43 June 30 2008, 09:29:33 UTC

*grins* Cute! I like Mal's misconception and Kaylee's enticing whisper and the trap Jayne falls for! *giggles*

catko July 3 2008, 07:15:14 UTC

Thanks everyone. It was a great prompt for some great characters.