Was so glad to see an update to this story, I missed it a lot.
I loved how Donna Ackles makes Jared feel welcome in their family & how she brings them to be checked out by the Doctor.
That Doctor is a little on the stupid side, she believes that Jared is being abused & she doesn't report it. Then she doesn't know who Donna is to Jared & she tells her she knows about the abuse. Would not have a been good thing if Donna had been the one abusing him.
It's been a long time since Jared had someone to look out for him like that so it will be a nice change for him.
I'm glad that he has Jensen to talk to about everything & that eventually he will talk to Donna as well & the police...
Don't hate me for this but I did notice a few things & I don't mean to offend in any way.
there new house guest should be their Thankyou Doctor is missing the space between Thank you a lil lost should be a little lost has allot of cuts and bruises should be a lot I would say is been abused should be he has been abused hears a nock should be knock mah birthday should be my birthday Thankyou Donna, the space thing again Thank you Were happy should be We're get to use to all of this should be too use... over yesterdays events, not sure if both spelling are right, should be yesterday's
that's that he needs to know. should be that's what ... they stair at Jensen's should be they stare both stair at each other like again should be stare TWO MINUITS BOYS." should be minutes
I loved how Donna Ackles makes Jared feel welcome in their family & how she brings them to be checked out by the Doctor.
That Doctor is a little on the stupid side, she believes that Jared is being abused & she doesn't report it. Then she doesn't know who Donna is to Jared & she tells her she knows about the abuse. Would not have a been good thing if Donna had been the one abusing him.
It's been a long time since Jared had someone to look out for him like that so it will be a nice change for him.
I'm glad that he has Jensen to talk to about everything & that eventually he will talk to Donna as well & the police...
Don't hate me for this but I did notice a few things & I don't mean to offend in any way.
there new house guest should be their
Thankyou Doctor is missing the space between Thank you
a lil lost should be a little lost
has allot of cuts and bruises should be a lot
I would say is been abused should be he has been abused
hears a nock should be knock
mah birthday should be my birthday
Thankyou Donna, the space thing again Thank you
Were happy should be We're
get to use to all of this should be too use...
over yesterdays events, not sure if both spelling are right, should be yesterday's
that's that he needs to know. should be that's what ...
they stair at Jensen's should be they stare
both stair at each other like again should be stare
TWO MINUITS BOYS." should be minutes
Looking forward to the next update.
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