[fic] Packing Challenge Response
Title: No Appetite
Length: 121 words
"It's a filthy disease, Mr. Z," Klaus bit out. "Be careful you don't catch it."
"Yes, Sir!"
"Oh, darling, really!"
Klaus was careful to keep his eyes 8.5 centimeters above the earl's left shoulder. "I had been intending to eat," he said, "but I've lost my appetite."
The soggy hamburger he handed over to his man had a large bite missing. "Finish this, Mr. Z."
"Yes, Sir!"
"Now be reasonable, Major!"
"You will not interfere this time! Take that.... contraption off and get out of my way."
Dorian smiled blindingly. "There's nothing contrived about it; all natural ingredients. It's a secret recipe. G approves, don't you?"
"Oh, best-packed bra I've ever seen, Earl!"
" ...... Really, G. No need to be crude."
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ps - Anyone willing to do a beta for me on a longer fic? Grammar, punctuation, holistic.... anything would make me a happy girl.
Length: 121 words
"It's a filthy disease, Mr. Z," Klaus bit out. "Be careful you don't catch it."
"Yes, Sir!"
"Oh, darling, really!"
Klaus was careful to keep his eyes 8.5 centimeters above the earl's left shoulder. "I had been intending to eat," he said, "but I've lost my appetite."
The soggy hamburger he handed over to his man had a large bite missing. "Finish this, Mr. Z."
"Yes, Sir!"
"Now be reasonable, Major!"
"You will not interfere this time! Take that.... contraption off and get out of my way."
Dorian smiled blindingly. "There's nothing contrived about it; all natural ingredients. It's a secret recipe. G approves, don't you?"
"Oh, best-packed bra I've ever seen, Earl!"
" ...... Really, G. No need to be crude."
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ps - Anyone willing to do a beta for me on a longer fic? Grammar, punctuation, holistic.... anything would make me a happy girl.