Comments | cassiopaya: FANFIC!!! Quarter, Part 2

cassiopaya

FANFIC!!! Quarter, Part 2

Nov 03, 2011 01:13

Title: Quarter
Style: Prose
Genre: Drama
Words: 966
Rating: R
Length: Ficlet
Pairings: None
Warnings: Surgery, Bodily Fluids, and Spoilers for OST!
Authoress: cassiopaya
Characters: Lt. Theodore Groves, Lt. Andrew Gillette, and Don Gutierre de Hevia y Valdés
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Dedication: All my NavyGirls!
Notes: The only logical conclusion to what ( Read more... )

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Comments 11

ophelivia November 3 2011, 07:33:11 UTC

OHMYGAWD SECOND INSTALLMENT!

Andrew, you're such a fuckin BAMF.

8D cassiopaya November 3 2011, 21:00:34 UTC

YES HE IS!

corrielle November 3 2011, 19:35:02 UTC

*wince* That was... extraordinarily painful to read, but Theo's made of some pretty tough stuff, there.

But this line... this kind of broke my soul for a second before I realized Theo was all right...

It seemed as though Theo had been screaming for hours, but when Andrew noticed how suddenly quiet it had become it felt as though his whole being had snapped back into his body after floating for a bit in the haze after battle.

Andrew's worry for his friend, Theo being cheeky and wanting the bullet that almost killed him... so perfect and wonderful and harrowing all at the same time. I love the way you write them both SO MUCH.

cassiopaya November 3 2011, 21:15:07 UTC

Theodore Groves is an original badass.

I originally wrote that part differently, then I realized it wasn't quite right - it wasn't scary enough. Terror when someone you love is in danger is a given and I hadn't quite gotten it there.

I think Groves is Gillette's last, best friend at this point and it finally hits him when he thinks Theo might be dead or dying. (Theo already regards Andrew as his last, best friend and I think probably wooed Barbossa into pulling some strings to get Andrew on board, as it were.)

I don't know how, but I find it so easy to write these boys as friends...no - not easy - but natural. Yes, that's it. :)

Sorry to have almost broke your soul - have a cookie! ::hugs::

binkie_86 November 4 2011, 02:04:38 UTC

This is totally what happened. I refuse to think otherwise! *crosses arms defiantly*

This was great. I loved it! I particularly liked how neither one of them would relinquish that flag. Brilliant. :) You almost made it seem like the flag was a character in itself.

cassiopaya November 4 2011, 05:14:05 UTC

...you know...that's a good idea...I think I'll name the flag...Jack. Maybe he could make it with one of the wigs. ;) you're terrible for encouraging me, you know?

binkie_86 November 6 2011, 04:18:41 UTC

I know, I AM terrible. ;) But, I shall take full responsibility for my actions and any plot bunnies my comment may have unintentionally inspired. But, really... a little Crack!Fic every now and then never hurt anyone. ;)

I will now head off to bed with images of fluffy white wigs curled up all snuggly and warm with Jack the flag in my head... *snicker*

cassiopaya November 6 2011, 05:01:37 UTC

You are so bad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

::wigbunnies::

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pearlseed November 4 2011, 03:58:04 UTC

Scary and sad and what you do if you love someone. You share your life in life and you share at the dying too or the bad sick or bad wreck or whatever. I've never seen myself as strong or particularly capable, but I've grown into these things...you writ it so good...truth.

cassiopaya November 4 2011, 05:16:15 UTC

D'aawwwwwww! ::hugs:: Thankies so much!