Comments | carolinecrane: Fic: Butterfly Effect 26/? (Big Wolf on Campus, Tommy/Merton, NC17)

carolinecrane

Fic: Butterfly Effect 26/? (Big Wolf on Campus, Tommy/Merton, NC17)

Dec 02, 2005 20:14

More Butterfly Effect. I struggled with this chapter, so...yeah. I have no idea what to say.

ETA: Earlier chapters here.

( Chapter 26: Transgressions )

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Comments 18

writingpathways December 3 2005, 01:29:10 UTC

Merton is so cute, thinking he's doing Tommy this huge favor. But that almost kiss from Tommy wasn't pity, silly boy -- it was the first stumbling step out of Tommy's denial. Granted it had bad timing.

Tommy is so adorable, and I'm doubting he'll stay that mad at Merton for that long, he's too sweet and adorable. And I still want hug and make him hot chocoalte.

How long until there is more?

And yay on Becky/Lori!!

carolinecrane December 3 2005, 03:14:48 UTC

I'm glad the Merton part worked. I was worried most about that, because it was all very frantic as I was writing it and then I couldn't make myself reread it because I'm braindead and can't multitask. So yeah, I'm trying to say thanks.

I will try to write more soon. Maybe this week, even, once the Project of Doom is handed in.

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carolinecrane December 3 2005, 03:12:22 UTC

Seriously, I have been trying to figure out for 108 pages how to work in Becky/Lori. I'm just glad I finally managed it so I can stop obsessing : )

I'm so relieved to hear the pace is working for you. This fic...it gives me headaches bigtime, so I always worry. Anyway, thanks.

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carolinecrane December 7 2005, 00:03:21 UTC

Hee. I spent the other day rereading the prior parts just so I could figure out a timeline. Glad you're enjoying : )

spoiledjap December 3 2005, 05:55:54 UTC

Angsty boys almost figuring out that they like each other, kink #15. And I too love how you put in Becky/Lori.

carolinecrane December 7 2005, 00:02:32 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked.

chyldofeternity December 3 2005, 12:26:34 UTC

*Falls over all dead like* You killed me! With the amazingness that ish the story you killed me. Oooh >.> I wonder if I can call work and be all like "Sorry, can't come in today, Tommy/Merton soinlovebutsoindenial!fic killed me." and have it count. *ponderponder*

So good ^_^ Just totally awesome. Love it bunches! *has urge to reread more again! >.<*

carolinecrane December 7 2005, 00:02:16 UTC

Thanks, that's nice of you to say. I don't think anyone's ever called in fic before, but I suppose there's a first time for everything.