FIC: Out of Exile (LotRPS)

[caras_galadhon]

Title: Out of Exile
Author: Galadriel (caras_galadhon)
Fandom: LotRPS
Pairing: Bean/Viggo
Rating: G
Archive: Lothlorien, sons_of_gondor, and Green OpalsFeedback: Always appreciated

Comments

[ribby]

*deep breath* It's a good start--now as long as they talk, it may yet work out. But oh, the *pain* in this is so tangible... so much emotion and history in so few, utterly perfectly chosen words. Gorgeous!

~Kris

[ribby]

And I just realized that my first comment there might seem odd--so what I meant was that it's a good start that they're agreeing to talk, not that the fic was a good start! *grin* It's wonderful and perfect as it is.

*sigh* Friday.

~Kris

[caras_galadhon]

Hee. No, no, I got what you were saying, no worries there. (And look, go me, responding to feedback right away! Woo! ...I'm scared.)

*sigh* Friday.
No! Fridays are good. Gooooood. ^_~

[ribby]

Wooo! Go you! Need a feedback cuddle? It helps when it scares you... *grins and cuddles*

And Fridays are great at 5PM. Up until then? Not so much. *grin*

~Kris

[alex_quine]

Particularly like the phrase 'left without leaving' which encompasses the world of hurt for the abandoned partner. Hope that this can go forward for your characters. Talking is nearly always better than silence.

[caras_galadhon]

Thank you! I'm especially glad that phrase worked out. ^_^

Hope that this can go forward for your characters.
There's at least one more part to this, I'm pretty sure, so I imagine so, yes. *G*

[brigantine]

Ice formed in burned-out fissures, flash-freezing every fantasized reply.

Ow, I think most of us have been there, and hurt that. All those angry daydreams of lashing out at someone who shredded us for reasons we still don't understand. Yep.

Really good stuff!

[caras_galadhon]

Ow, I think most of us have been there, and hurt that.
*nodnod* I imagine so, and I'm pleased it really came through. Thanks! (Granted, my daydreams may have involved cars and repeated running overs, but if confronted, I'll deny it. ^_~ Not quite sure what Sean's angry fantasies involved, although I bet they were vivid.)

Thank you for your very kind words!

[caras_galadhon]

Thank you for your kind words, Rae! I'm glad the emotion in the story resonates well for you.

But hopefully it turns around right.
Well, there's still time for Viggo to screw it up further, I imagine. ^_~ If that's possible.

[aprilkat]

So incisive and painful - yet there really is some hope for a new start here. Talking - and asking...

[caras_galadhon]

Thanks for your very kind feedback, my friend! I'm glad it's working out all right, and thank you for letting me know.

yet there really is some hope for a new start here.
Well, we'll certainly have to see if Viggo follows through all right. ^_~ *crosses fingers*