*deep breath* It's a good start--now as long as they talk, it may yet work out. But oh, the *pain* in this is so tangible... so much emotion and history in so few, utterly perfectly chosen words. Gorgeous!
And I just realized that my first comment there might seem odd--so what I meant was that it's a good start that they're agreeing to talk, not that the fic was a good start! *grin* It's wonderful and perfect as it is.
~Kris
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*sigh* Friday.
~Kris
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*sigh* Friday.
No! Fridays are good. Gooooood. ^_~
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And Fridays are great at 5PM. Up until then? Not so much. *grin*
~Kris
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*whimpers, nods and cuddles* Thank you. *shivers* ^_~
And Fridays are great at 5PM. Up until then? Not so much. *grin*
Ha. Ok, you've got me there. In that case, I hope 5pm comes fast for you. *G*
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I'm so pleased that the emotion and history is coming through; I'm sure you know better than most about the challenges of the drabble form. ^_~
Anyway, there's at least one more part to this, that I know. Thank you for your kind words, Kris! ♥
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