Beyond The Clouds.

Mar 02, 2011 19:33

Title: Beyond the Clouds
Rating: PG
Pairing: Junhyung/Yoseob
Word Count: 1,557
Summary: It's not about the years in your life, but the life in your years. Maybe it had to take a boy with a cheery personality and a sparkle in his eyes to help him realize that.
A/N: Happy birthday to my wifey callmejokeer who still loves me (hopefully) even though i'm so bad to ( Read more... )

p: junseob, !fanfic, g: beast

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MY SPOT callmejokeer March 3 2011, 01:10:28 UTC
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Re: MY SPOT callmejokeer March 3 2011, 02:39:28 UTC
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what is this
is so precious ide
i was at the edge of the tears~ ;A;

omg, i'm not going to lie, there are little awkward bits, but the characterization and the description made me stare in wonder and wae did you stop writing ihu
lying, i love you more than i could love you ♥♥

first of all, omggggggg junhyung smoking *A* i can't handle the sexyness :((
and yoseob being an hyper qt boy struggling through cancer ;___;
making all the guys in the hospital happy waylt ;A;!!!

and this omg
"It’s like they are the imperfections of the sky, but sometimes they try to shield us from the uncertainty of what lies beyond it, space or maybe even heaven, and sometimes, they try to warn us of the storm and miseries that lay ahead"
i will never see the clouds the same way i did before ;A; these words are too beautiful

and lol at junhyung trying to be normal but failing sm, this line was so qt
Junhyung laughed too, and the sound was horrid and scratchy at first, but no one seemed to notice how unnatural it was, and Junhyung ( ... )

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Re: MY SPOT callmejokeer March 3 2011, 02:40:56 UTC
I’m Yoseob. You know, light yo, fire seob.

giggling so much. ide.

YOSEOB ILU

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caramel_chai March 4 2011, 00:27:20 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it! I was scard that it would turn out completely messy, haha.
he does stop! at the end. but don't you find the idea of junhyung being all bad boy and smoking somewhat hot? cuz i do xD
thanks for reading and commenting bb! it really means a lot <3

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senbonsakura March 3 2011, 15:37:16 UTC
Yoseob is so so soooooo precious!
Oh and my bias, Junhyung... bittersweet clouds...
I love love love this fic

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caramel_chai March 4 2011, 00:28:32 UTC
awhhh, i'm really glad you liked it!
thanks for reading and commenting bb, it really means a lot <3

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mecomaicel March 3 2011, 16:44:50 UTC
I really like this...
very beautiful.... :)

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caramel_chai March 4 2011, 00:29:37 UTC
i'm really glad you liked this!
thanks for reading and commenting and for the compliment bb! it means a lot <3

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soya_riceball March 3 2011, 21:40:24 UTC
i'm so speechless. this is beautiful. i mean, i'm completely speechless. can't even describe it. but i really really like it.
“and oh by the way, i’m Yoseob. you know, light yo, fire seob. it’s nice to finally meet you.”
ADKGHAF my favorite line \O/ AND his english reference. lolol xD
and WAE WAE (shock reference. lol see what i did?) did he smoke D: (i'm junhyung-biased)
y u give him cancer?! D: seobbie doesn't deserve cancer D':
thanks for writing and sharing ^^

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caramel_chai March 4 2011, 00:35:33 UTC
i'm glad it was good enough to make you speechless. i mean, it's not like thats a good thing, maybe it is, but im so rusty and wasn't sure if this was good at all. so i'm glad.
har har, yes the english reference, i just HAD to xD
because he's being all bad boy! idk, i have a tendency to make junhyung smoke. it's somewhat hot, no?
but at least i brought seobbie back right? D: he's was serving to help junhyung realize and i just had to do it ):
anyways, thanks for reading and commenting bb! it really means a lot <3

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