Fic: Leave Me Alone!

Nov 28, 2010 19:36

Pardon me while I sing like Pickles for a moment:

"I did it! I did it! I finally f~riff~in' did it! I finally finished this fic!"

*ahem*

Okay, this is supposed to be gift fic for delaese, when she was feeling poorly with the bad sinuses and all. Her sinuses are probably better by now, but she just hurt herself so I guess this can still be feel ( Read more... )

fic-nugatorytm, fic:-pickles, fic:-toki, fic-pg-13

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stovetop00 November 29 2010, 03:40:57 UTC
LJ-Cut, for great justice! :-D

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nugatorytm November 29 2010, 03:43:31 UTC
Hee, sorry about that. It ams fixed now.

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downmoon November 29 2010, 03:59:05 UTC
BEEEAUUTIFULLL.

delaese is one lucky duck ;)

This was so cute! Well written, and HILARIOUS, and totally adorable! And, ooh la la, some noice tension in the shower.

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nugatorytm November 29 2010, 04:10:29 UTC
I thought it was a little too heavy in the exposition department, but that's what happens when these guys just want to play in the shower all night.

*slaps ineffectually at Pickles and Toki*

I have half a mind to expand a little on that shower scene, perhaps as a dream sequence, but only if Rattie wants it.

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downmoon November 29 2010, 04:12:22 UTC
Oh no, you wrote it deliciously.

Hahahah! Naughty boys!

......I VOTE YES.

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nugatorytm November 29 2010, 04:15:14 UTC
Hmm, perhaps I'd better prepare for writing that scene anyway. I'm pretty sure Ms. Rat won't be too opposed to some shower porn.

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EEEEEEEEEEE madiyasha November 29 2010, 03:59:51 UTC
I love SickFic.
So much.

ESPECIALLY WHEN IT'S PICKLES. [...Sickles?]
And this was just
awwwh. *wibble*
Adorable.

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Re: EEEEEEEEEEE nugatorytm November 29 2010, 04:13:07 UTC
I adore SickFic myself. Kinda turns my hurt/comfort crank a bit.

You just can help wibbling over an ill Pickles, it's like wanting to cuddle a sick puppy. Can't resist it at all.

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pandaklok November 29 2010, 04:21:16 UTC
This is so unbelievably adorable...these two are so precious together. I can just imagine Nathan coming into his private quarters and not knowing whether to kick them out or just stand there and go "D'awwww...."

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nugatorytm November 29 2010, 04:30:07 UTC
Heh, that depends on the situation. If Nathan sees Toki cuddling a sick Pickles, he'd likely go, "D'awwwwww..." and possibly want to join in the cuddle party.

On the other hand, if they're having a slam-bang porn party in there, he'd more than likely kick 'em to the curb. Okay, maybe join in first, then kick 'em to the curb.

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nugatorytm November 29 2010, 04:37:37 UTC
I will admit right now that "John-Pear" is not my idea. I'm not really sure who coined it first, but if memory serves, it was the brilliant twilightspeaks. It stuck in my memory so much, I had to use it in tribute.

I firmly believe with all my heart that Betty White should guest-star on the show as Toki's great aunt. And yes, she'd sleep with Skwisgaar, much to Toki's ire.

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