Fic: Leave Me Alone!

[nugatorytm]

Pardon me while I sing like Pickles for a moment:

"I did it! I did it! I finally f~riff~in' did it! I finally finished this fic!"

*ahem*

Okay, this is supposed to be gift fic for delaese, when she was feeling poorly with the bad sinuses and all. Her sinuses are probably better by now, but she just hurt herself so I guess this can still be feel

Comments

[downmoon]

BEEEAUUTIFULLL.

delaese is one lucky duck ;)

This was so cute! Well written, and HILARIOUS, and totally adorable! And, ooh la la, some noice tension in the shower.

[nugatorytm]

I thought it was a little too heavy in the exposition department, but that's what happens when these guys just want to play in the shower all night.

*slaps ineffectually at Pickles and Toki*

I have half a mind to expand a little on that shower scene, perhaps as a dream sequence, but only if Rattie wants it.

[downmoon]

Oh no, you wrote it deliciously.

Hahahah! Naughty boys!

......I VOTE YES.

[nugatorytm]

Hmm, perhaps I'd better prepare for writing that scene anyway. I'm pretty sure Ms. Rat won't be too opposed to some shower porn.

[downmoon]

yes.

[moogle_maniac]

As much as I love unresolved sexual tension, I would not mind an extended shower scene either :D

[delaese]

Rattie wants it.

[nugatorytm]

And the ayes have it! Well, you got the sweet, now prepare for the tart!

[delaese]

WHOO!