APPARENTLY LINKS COUNT AS FAILCASE NOW...

Sep 13, 2009 04:27

SO YOU GET A REJECTED LIMERICK FROM THE HOODLAND CHALLENGE. SO THERE.

SIR GUY WENT TO THE LOCAL TAVERN

TO SEE IF SOME TAIL HE'D BE HAVIN'

WHEN COLLAPSED ON THE BED,

THE BARMAID, SHE SAID,

"THAT WAS GREAT, BUT WHO'S ALLAN?"

SHUT UP IT DOES RHYME, AND HAVE THE RIGHT NUMBER OF SYLLABLES. YOU'RE JUST READING IT WRONG. READ IT OUT LOUD, AT THE TOP ( Read more... )

look what boredom has made me do, why is there no guy/allan tag?, i am lame, what time is it? forfeit o'clock, hell yes this is poetry, affairs of the bow, poetry is music from the soul dammit

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queerlyobscure September 12 2009, 18:56:21 UTC
I WAS MORE CONCERNED WITH CORRECT RHYME AND METER FOR THE CHALLENGE ONES. THOUGH THE MORE I LOOK AT THE ONES I ENTERED, THE MORE I LIKE THIS ONE...

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wastingyourgum September 12 2009, 18:47:03 UTC
I BELIEVE THE INSERTION (*SNORT*) OF A SIMPLE "THE FUCK" IN THE LAST LINE WOULD HELP TREMENDOUSLY...

WITH ANYTHING REALLY - LIMERICKS, DISSERTATIONS, THESISISISISES...

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queerlyobscure September 12 2009, 18:58:03 UTC
EVERYTHING IS BETTER WITH A "FUCK", 'TIS TRUE *WISE NOD*

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railise September 12 2009, 19:27:33 UTC
THIS IS ONE O' THEM DEEP TRUTHS THAT MYSTICS SEEK, ISN'T IT?

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queerlyobscure September 12 2009, 19:32:55 UTC
I SUSPECT SO. IT'S RIGHT UP THERE WITH "42" AND EVERYTHING.

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lakegirl September 12 2009, 19:24:32 UTC
*READS* HAHA.

*READS AGAIN* OH! OHO. CHEEKY. ^_^

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hazular September 12 2009, 23:53:51 UTC
PAHAHAHA. WE ALL KNOW THIS IS CANON.

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