Worst Mistake Part 3

[caoilin_noir]

Hi all, thanks again for the encouragement, it's much appreciated

Comments

[shingo_the_pest]

wouldn’t have done a hundred other little things that had their roots in instinct and impulse and a life learning the fine line of when to jump and when to duck.

He's lost an essential part of himself and it makes me want to cry. ;_; I thought my heart was at it's most broken in the first few paragraphs, but things only got worse from there. Jim won't say anything about what's going on, but he's begging in every other way for Bones to see. And poor Spock is all fucked up. Maybe his head is clear right after sex, but his thoughts and actions are twisted at all other times. And goddamnit McCoy, why couldn't you have put the pieces together soon? Eleven fucking months...

We got to the double penetration, the entire reason I read this prompt in the first place. But I'm too wrapped up in the emotional agony of it all, and the sex is overshadowed by the psychological drama.

I am loving this. I really am. Hurt me more plz.

[caoilin_noir]

I am loving this. I really am. Hurt me more plz.

Well, only if you insist. More sex and angst, and maybe a few answers, only a click away :-P

[brererabbit]

OH my LAWD....

*is shaking*

i think i love you.

[caoilin_noir]

why thank you. I take payment in chocolate, coffee and first-borns, whichever is most convenient for you.

Also, had to re-write the kirk/spock sex scene about four times then think of something really, really sad, 'cause I just couldn't get the image of Spock with a rose between his teeth spouting cheesy pick-up lines.

I think it turned out suitable angsty though, and hopefully just a little bit hot! Enjoy ;-)

[brererabbit]

[logical_stimuli]

Guh. I think you just killed my brain. <3

Beautifully done!

[caoilin_noir]

that was of course my evil plan for world domination, take the world out, one livejournal reader at a time. There's more, if you feel up to it, of course...

[anonymous]

I loved how messed up Kirk is and the dubcon/noncon nature of the DP and the year! of sex with Spock are amazing!

Can't wait to see how this all turns out.

[caoilin_noir]

hello - well there's an ending of sorts up now, plus more sex and angst, of course, so enjoy, and thanks for the comment xxx

[shadowqueen28]

Wow, I definitely did not expect the stuff with McCoy at the end. This story is so messed up and yet so addicting. I really can't wait for part 4!

[caoilin_noir]

your wish is my command, my queen. Also we appear to have used the same photo still for an icon, clear evidence that great minds think alike, or there's some kind of hive mind for fangirls, which would be truly terrifying.

Part 4's just up, so enjoy!