The Apartment: Building Up (Fanfic100)

[candyfics]

Title: The Apartment: Building Up
Fandom: Detective Conan
Characters: Heiji/Kazuha (General series)
Prompt: #14-green
Word Count: 7922 words
Rating: R (for sexuality)
Author's Notes: I do not own Detective Conan. It all belongs to Gosho Aoyama. I simply borrow the characters, tie them up, and dance them around like life-sized puppets. I do wish

Comments

[girlquinn]

Your apartment series is always nice to read. I get to see these two progress together. Eventually, I expect a wedding somewhere in here! And a kid! Yeah...

Sweet, sweet stuff, although you insist that you can't write smut. It's not the mechanics that's important; it's the emotions and you got that down, girl! Great job... I have a cavity.

[candyfics]

Thank you! Glad you liked it :D And I actually do know where this series will go. There will be...hmm...maybe four more Apartment fics in this challenge?

...but...I thought that things like emotions and use of the "L" word was confusing to the perverted readers! *RUNS LIKE THE WIND*

*glomps you* ^_~

[marsdejahthoris]

You do not suck at writing smut! This was lovely smut! And it was also lovely and romantic, which a lot of smut is not, so I think you're better than most smutters. :)

[candyfics]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed! \o/ Hee...smutters...I like that word :D

[amethyst_water]

Hi there. I've been reading most of your DC and I could say that next to the Shinichi/Ran 30kisses challenge the Apartment series is my next favorite. Am still blushing after reading this fic.

(I promise to review more and not lurk.)

Great emotion and great build up = good read

[candyfics]

Hey! Nice to hear from you! We're friendly 'round these parts ^_~

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it :D *fans the blush away*

[cherelle_holmes]

Late but whhheeeeee~ I finally read the ficcu~! And I LOVE it! Of course ;)

It’s always so much fun to read the apartment fics! And I really liked that it was more out of Heiji’s view, because most of the A-fics we’re kinda Kazuha sided~

Finally the smexy-part! XD And no ma’am you do not suck at writing smut! Quite the opposite! You write awesome smexy-fics ;) You write them with so much feelings and emotions *nods* There are not many ficcers out there who do that! *cuddles* And you madam -out of all the smexy-fics I’ve read so far- definitely write the pretties!

Uhm and… have a question! Dunno why that bugs me, and if I already asked you, but what exactly is Kazuha’s job? XD I mean, she can’t sit at home the whole day and wait till Heiji comes back huh?

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Sorry I can't keep it back! - Heiji's tongue is not only talented when solving cases or telling stupid lies huh? >D *snickers*

[candyfics]

I was thinking of you the entire time I was writing this ^_~ So I'm exceptionally glad that you liked it. Thanks, lady! And yes, there's a lot of Kazuha's POV in these... ^^;;

It's a good thing that you think I'm good at writing smut, since I'm working on that one for you 8D Which is on hold, along with everything else, while I try to get my crap together for this move. Thank you! *squishies the Cherry*

Mental canon says that Kazuha works in a clothing store. It just hasn't been touched on in the actual fic series :P

... *THROWS SOMETHING AT YOU*

[silmelin]

Thank you for this story. I really like it.

Well, I think you are my favorite english writer of DC fanfics (I a big fan of Heiji x Kazuha coupling). I'm really hard to please with Heiji x Kazuha fanfics you know. I live in Japan for 5 years so I just don't like stories wich are too different from the japanese way of life. And I don't like stories when the authors write bad.

I'm french and my english is not pretty good but when I read your stories I find you write really nice. And this SMUT fic is quite good. Not vulgar, with a lot of delicacy. But not to naive or ingenuous. That's what I like.

I just have a question. You said (in the fic):
"…it hurt more than she thought it would. But she had only done this once before, and it had been a while. "
So if I understand it well, she did it with the other guy one time in America. So why does it hurt this time? She's not virgin so...

Sorry, my question may be stupid but I just wanted to know.

Well, I really love this fic. Is it the last chapter of the "Appartment" serie? T__T

[candyfics]

Thank you so much! It makes me so happy to hear you say that! :D I'm really glad you like my stories \o/

And yes, Kazuha did have a bit of a fling in the States. It did not end well, and it's what sent her back to Heiji in Japan ^___^ This is not the last chapter, though. I think I had ideas for at least three or four more?

Thanks again! *glomps*

And sorry for the late response--I just moved *deadface*